Future me, don't bother

I can't stop laughing at the end...damn ichigo catches no break huh. He is the "chosen one" so all trouble just follows him lmaoooooo.

Bro this idea is sick you know whoever writes this story in thier own words will never mtach this one i beg you to continue this thing my man thats all i can ask for but please rethink about ending thik like a cliffanger just is wackness my man please add new chaps for this.

pls delete this shit!

Thabk you!
The fact that it is forever open ended is sad but HOLY COW this was just to amazing to actually feel any sort of true disappointment!
I loved this!
There's no way I can't just... Not favorite thus.
It's beautiful.
Amazing, really.

I keep imagining Hichigo doing the "Goofy Holler" when he got pushed off the building in Ichigo's inner world (...as if that scene wasn't already funny enough XD )

I really like the dynamic between the characters in this story, especially the sarcastic comments from Hichigo and the banter between him and ichigo - or ichigo and renji.

I like the fic but I don't really like how 80% of the time Ichigo is being treated like a joke by the rest of the cast tbh

Great story! Sad that it won't be continued but it was very exciting

I've bashed this fic before and it was shit then... It's been a while and I came back to re-read it and it just gets on my nerves a lot how you ignore your main character like this ALL THE TIME. Really not a good thing to do when trying to write a story or fanfic.

You failed!

I first read this story…hoo, I don’t even remember when. Years and years ago. I think it was one of the ones that inspired me to write Bleach fanfiction in the first place. The banter between the two of them here is top notch, and you’ve done a superb job of taking what little we’re given for the hollow in canon and sprinting with it to create a character with clear desires and goals.

In particular for this chapter, Ichigo’s negotiation with Hichigo is written so well. Both parties have something they want but can’t get everything. Ichigo’s line “I’m saying that if I were to give up control now, you’d always live in doubt, wondering if you really deserve control…” is genuinely persuasive. As a reader, I was on Hichigo’s side in terms of pros/cons of the deal until Ichigo came out with that, at which point I thought, huh, he’s got a point.

Anyway, I’ve rambled. Thanks for writing this story; it’s excellent from the first chapter to the last.

The ending was like itch that i cant scratchὢ

This is a really interesting fic. I love the way you portrayed the relationship between ichigo and hichigo. I wish you the best of luck on your other projects.

What a shitfic lol this crap belongs in a toilet

Now I just need to see a Kenpachi Ichigo pic.

this is even awesomer than I remember.