Reviews for Bed
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Full of love and desire and many others. I really admire you authors who can write love scenes without making it look like porn or something. Really like this!
Review chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Great smut fic! 8D
silverstri chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
O.O

Wow...

i think i need a cold shower...
Edge-Keen Blade chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
That was really good-great job! _ It's funny how the song 'Bed' by J. Holiday inspired u to write such a fic lol xD
TehYuriGirl1516 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Aw... *squeals* X3 That was soo sweet!
Bad one chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Wow! That was nice! Now I'm really curious to know what is waiting for us in 'Hostage' Hope you upload soon :)
someone chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Whoa -blush- that was...um -cough- how old r u? well ii'm probably as young as you or younger anways! hahahaha! but what really made me uncomfortable was the...was the um...

-turns even more red- well..the err...massaging...NOT THAT ITS BAD! no its just kinda...well i havent really encountered M-rated stories that had...massaging...so it was kinda new to me

but all in all it was great
NomadLegna chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
WOW that was really good. Oh ya some advice don't be embarrassed by what you write.
lindred chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
you're WHAT age? shoot. now i'm the one blushing.
The.Hoppy chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
'Natsuki’s fingers which were still inside of Natsuki.'- confusion? Unless I just can't focus today. Anyhow, that...that was very...good. (coherency?) The sort of thing you could get wrapped up in, because it wasn't just about the smut. (which was also good, by the by) And yes, those four words were... *claps* Happy. (coherency?) ' I liked it.

~Naolin
volk83 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT.

Ara ara the onlys word in this story is the best and the sweetest words ever, well beside I LOVE YOU. "

fu fu good title with best story's rate. /

wow Kookie-san you really good with smex scenes maybe you should write it more often. (H_H)b

~THANK FOR WRITING&SHARING~ 3
Kara Papas chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
OMG! kookie...-cough cough- and you are how old again? Young lady -cough- you need to think about your audience...actually i'm quite certain a majority of them are your age...and the others are just older perverts like me.. but -cough- you've done me proud kid. WOAH...-cough- I'm red in the face. gosh...lol

I can understand the embarassment. I believe you kookie. I ahd a hell of a time writing all my smex stories. That's why there aren't that many of them. Well...most of my stories are M rated but. -cough- I have gotten better at writing them. You did a really good job. The rawness of the sexuality in this fic is so obvious and that is good. Raw nature is what I think readers like...lol I know I do. It makes it more real to the average person...girl. But...

GOOD JOB! you have officially gotten a long winded response from me. LOL

kara
Water Queen 24 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Yay for smex and that's areally good song also it's a sweet fic.