Reviews for Catching Fish in Summer
oldshoe chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I love everything about this. Thanks for the great read. :D
Autum chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
That was beautiful!
RazZadig chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Very poignant. It reaches out to the audience since who hasn't felt alone in a crowd or felt like the third wheel with another couple. I like Kakashi's realization that he can't say his feelings since they are so raw. It would make him too vulnerable and burden a new relationship.

On the other hand, is that a guy thing to be bouncing around those poor goldfish? I never would have thought to write something like that, it was a neat little visual detail. The setting is very well done. The whole narrative is poetic and makes a point. Just what a short story should do.
Kiterie chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
I like how calm and sad but sweet this is. And I love the color symbolism. *grins*
Azamiko chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
Very nice introspection, very sweet, but not fluffy.
cdkobasiuk chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
oh, that was lovely. It felt like Iruka and KaKashi were swimming in ever decreasing circles around each other.

hedwig's angry inch chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Nicely done! I really like the feel of it, the atmosphere of the festival and the lonliness that always seems to hover over Iruka but which slowly dissipates under KAkashi's influence.