this is doesn't make sense,because there are so much illogical,irrational,unbelievable Hermione's action(and other character in different degree). Evidently, this is OOC. Hermione's mind is absolutely cracked with twisted morality(and funny, that she looks like hero in vast perspective killing villain, and we likely forgive her all other "smallmisdeeds"). Such magnitude of betrayal is horrendous,worst thing. Especially,when you can predict dire consequence,but doing nothing and indulge your own wishes. Nobody deserve this shit and only shit will be doing it. Albeit you create interesting background and characters, and i really like your writing,language, in general story is lacking believable reasoning and going,it look somehow raw and weak(iweep-queen- can't even cry,because end is so preposterous for me,that i can't accept it). anyway,thank you for this experience!

Wait what?!

Interesting! Is he going to write the lesson plans?

Bravo

OMG THIS WAS AMAZING I LOVE THIS SO MUCH- THERE WAS A GREAT TWIST! IDK WHY BUT I'M JUST SO HAPPY SEEING HERMIONE CHANGE THE BLACK TIMELINE AND SEE LIL TOM IN HER ORIGINAL GENERATION! GREAT BOOK, I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! I HOPE YOU WRITE ANOTHER TOMIONE BOOK :D

Great story, really liked the characters and their interactions! Thank you for sharing!

Is making Tom angry really the best idea?

Wow that was very unexpected

This is so interesting.

Come to think of it, after reading this many times, I'd love to see a sequel from the new little Hermione's and little Tom's perspectives...

Fantastic and original take on the Tomione time travel thread!

Actually I'm quite impressed as you kept Hermione's morals without the old "hermione joins the dark" trope which is now becoming boring and unbelievable. The climax was perfect as it doesn't shows that she won or lose in the end. In this plot both don't change there ways as Tom doesn't stop his dark magic and hermione also didn't submitted to him. Kudos to you...
Cygmione was also enjoyable however it was.

I’m sad that Severus is depicted as completely evil here.

Tom Riddle can cook? I did not see that coming. I mean it's probably his most redeeming quality, possibly his only redeeming quality lol, but he has one! And with him in a relationship with Hermione, she definitely needs someone who can cook. Will Abraxas really leave his issues there? Or will he attempt to try something with Hermione? If he does, will he survive? I can't wait to find out. As for Tom's conversation with Cy, what's he up to? Does it have to do with his discussion with Abraxas? I really liked this chapter, because Tom actually LISTENED to Hermione rather than trying to get his way.

At least she has a friend in Richard willing to listen to her and not sugar coat things. I understand Tom didn't want her to hurt herself after just getting home from the hospital, but he definitely doesn't listen well. At all. Lol, but as Richard said, he's stubborn.