|Reviews for The Ballad of Jilted John|
| Jade-t9 chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
beautiful...absolutely beautiful. hope you post more soon!
| orphanaccount15677 chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Wow. I think the way you write dialogue is amazing. It's really true to the characters (no OC! yay). Great job. I'm gonna read the rest of the stories now XD
| scorch66 chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Yay~ You wrote another Gravitation fic! I'm enjoying this one as much as your previous ones. I loved the ending of this chapter-posessive Yuki was so cute and I can't believe he let Shu get away with calling him "Eiri-chan". Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!;)
| DarkInuyashaangel101 chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
lol, that was cute! next chapter, please!
| Xedra chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
I absolutely adore this! Excellent! It's brilliant the way you mirroed Yuki's life in his novel, how easy you are with his thoughts. Can't wait to read more!
| noonsam chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Yay a new story! Once again your insight into the mind of Yuki Eiri is spot-on and fascinating. I can't wait to see what happens next! Loved how he named his main character after Shu's sis, and fused Mika and Tohma into one - apparently loyal and faithful - friend to Maiko.
I am looking forward to where this story takes us, especially what Eiri has to say to K about Shu's outfit-I just love possessive Eiri!
| Peacebonded chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
You have a beautiful writing style. Everything seemed to flow perfectly, and it captivated me until the veryend. I can't wait to read the rest! Update soon. ]