Nice story ending :)

I thought you ended that really well. Having Felicia talk at the end really did show a lot about her growth as a person. I can't believe I'm the only one to leave reviews... I think this has a potential to be a great movie. :) I would totally watch it! lookin forward to other works by you!

woo hoo! Bad guy gets his butt handed to him... YEA

mm... Why do you keep switching tenses in the action dialogue? It gets a little distracting. :)

o goody goody, tension is high and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what happens next. ah btw this sentence: 'Reno is cautiously waking his way' ... is supposed to be 'working' his way down the hall? :)

Now, Dmitri is just cruel...

This is a really interesting story. I'm not usually one to read screenplays, but I really like this. I can't wait to find out more about 'Mew'!