Reviews for Demons Within: Pie Style |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the fox ah nice I will talk to you on deviantart |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm there was a word put twice: "boy might bleed to death before they before found him" thought you should know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i always knew i didn't like sakura...not sure what that has to do with the chapter. oh it's getting closer to the good Parts! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH! i came in! *dances* WHHOO! go Xantox! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww the fist chapters up. i like the new begining. :D |
![]() ![]() damn it i kept clicking on the next chapter button for a minut befoer i finally realised that it only gosde up to four lol |
![]() ![]() really good clifhanger i liked the ending a lot so the deamon can transofrm into cats or anything? |
![]() ![]() that was awsome i seriously fell off of my chair lol i was surprised about the itachi brother thingy lol awsoem one i cant wait for next |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was vary well written and i liked the suspensfull ending i cnat wait for the next chapter to come out :) is this boy going to play a big part in the story and is he an uchiha or a phoney to sum it up nice story |