Reviews for The Incredible You
AngelRuby235 chapter 10 . 6/22
Nooooooooo! Please continue! Where are the rest of the chaps? Please don't drop ds half way! That would be a crime n laaaame! Plzzzzz update ASAP!
AngelRuby235 chapter 9 . 6/22
"I'm naked in nothing but a pink apron." Allen deadpanned.

"I'm naked in a fucking cake." Kanda growled as well.

"At least it isn't porn, okay?"

The two shared a look, an expression that clearly spoke volumes of "Bullshit".
...got me laughing fr a solid span of about ten minutes! Hats off! Ds fic is the funniest ever! U made my day, ya hear me?
AngelRuby235 chapter 8 . 6/22
Dear! Can Lavi's comments get any funnier? Jesus! Rofl! Unprotected sex with Kanda yu! Like godamn wow :D : genius!
AngelRuby235 chapter 7 . 6/22
Funniest chappie yet :D enough said ;3
AngelRuby235 chapter 6 . 6/21
Hahaha! Ds chapter was craaazy craazy! N yay fr krory! He makes an appearance
AngelRuby235 chapter 5 . 6/21
So Kanda is a gentleman after all eh? Heh!

But still...
"He meditated on the kitchen counter, falling asleep sitting up."...I couldn't help but second Allen! Like what the hell? :-O
AngelRuby235 chapter 4 . 6/21
Kanda snorted. "Don't orgasm on it, please"...such a Kanda-thing to say when he is pissed :P
AngelRuby235 chapter 3 . 6/21
Ok so the little brawl Kanda had with Allen at the food counter just soooooo reminds me of D gray man theatre kanda's week! That was funny :D and so is ds :D
AngelRuby235 chapter 2 . 6/21
"The One-Eyed Sexy Beast, of course. Or Lavi, but it's not recommended."...hahaha I love Lavi and I guess you know why...what? He makes me laugh like crazy of course;)
AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 6/21
"Someone has lost their child!" he called out. "If you're missing a kid, he's right here!"...oh my god!
Kyla-saurs-rex chapter 10 . 6/2
Where is the rest I'm dying here! :( sequel? Please!
figendog chapter 10 . 9/1/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! im rlly sad now... I want to murder you. then stab you with a bunch of nails. and stuff you in a bag. then throw you in a river. that was really weird... lol
figendog chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
fagness... I should use that. its genius!
Ramen God chapter 10 . 8/28/2014
I'm sorry you feel that way! I won't pressure you, but I really do love this story. It's amazingly written, flows so well, is incredibly in character, and is SO FREAKING HILARIOUS! Then again, most of your stories are.

Seriously though, I'm just like sitting and creepily smiling and everyone else is like um... What's wrong with you? And yeah.

Just wondering, are you still writing fanfiction at all? I understand if you lose inspiration for a fandom or fic (though if said fandom is D. Gray Man I'll cry my eye out because you're the best DGM writer evah!), but if possibly I would like to know if you're still writing at all.

Nonetheless, thank you for yet another lovely story! I really enjoyed it, and I hope you keep writing!

-Ramen God
KillFame chapter 10 . 7/28/2014
Hey I love this story so far. It has a lot of cliff hangers which I love sooo much. I hope u post another chapter soon. I just love Yullen. U are doing such a good job at writing this story keep going I know this story will be awesome.
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