|Reviews for Kisses on the Balcony|
| Shadow.Alchemist13 chapter 23 . 11/16
Woooow Riley is yelling at her friends for no real reason. Why am I not surprised? Also didn't they back off when Sirius asked them to?
Please take this as constructive criticism for whatever you choose to write next: it is possible to have too much drama. You should try to tone down the dramatics because they're so unrealistic. Like if there was a group of friends like those seven I feel like their friendships would all fail after a couples. They blow every single little thing out of proportion (well mainly James and Riley) and like idk I don't think anyone is that… crazy…
| Shadow.Alchemist13 chapter 22 . 11/16
And now I basically completely hate Riley. Why can't anyone in this fic listen to anyone else? It's like they like the drama.
Jdjdkskskal she basically came in between their relationship and then left Sirius because she's too petty to listen to him. Like tf please get over yourself.
| Shadow.Alchemist13 chapter 20 . 11/16
I like you story a lot but I find the whole James/Sirius fight ridiculous. I feel like their relationship is too strong for James to not believe in Sirius and not even know why he is feeling like that. And also probably because Riley is your oc...
Idk to me James and Sirius' relationship mirrors Harry's and Ron's. And when Ginny and Harry began dating Ron was okay with it... Obviously the situations are different but I still would like to believe that James wouldn't that much of an asshole who won't even listen to Sirius.
Other than that your story is great!
| Ward Point chapter 57 . 10/12
So I binged read over a a million words since Thursday. Part of me wants to give you the biggest hugs ever because it's been a while since I was so entertained. The other half of me wants to kill you because I've been procrastinating XD.
But no, in all honesty, I want to kill you because you've made me so attached to all these characters, but we all know how things turn out. You've explored them, you delved deep into their psyches... And they're all going to end in tragedy.
The only thing I can remember in recent history to compare it to is... Seeing Emma Stone as Gwen Stacy on the big screen. Chemistry on-screen is amazing... but I know that she's going to die, and so I feel depressed even as I watch it. It's the same thing as I read Kisses. I DON'T WANT THEM TO DIEEEEEEEE.
So as much as I hate this game of emotions you are playing with my feels... I'll be reading Love on the Balcony as soon as my semester ends. Keep it up :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/23
OH MY LORDS. WHEN THE HELL WILL YOU FINALLY UNDERSTAND?
LILY EVANS MADE BY J.K ROWLING IS A PERFECTLY CONFIDENT, CHEERFUL AND SELF-ASSURED YOUNG WOMAN AND NOTHING LIKE THIS WEAKLING YOU HAVE IN YOUR STORY. RILEY IS FAR BY THE STRONGEST CHARACTER, THAT'S WHAT LILY SHOULD HAVE BEEN. YOU SEEM VERY IGNORANT OF THE FACT THAT LILY'S INNER NATURE WAS LIKE HARRY'S. HARRY WASN'T SUCH A WEAKLING. LILY IS HONESTLY JUST SUCH A BORE IN THIS STORY. YOU ARE A HORRIBLE WRITER.
| Guest chapter 55 . 9/22
He shit his eyes? Typo...
| rl94 chapter 23 . 7/17
Ugh can't cope with Sirius and Riley being so hot and cold and damn it Sirius why did you do this?!
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/9
I need Sirius and Riley to be together. I just cried. You have amazing writing skills for making me feel this way! PLEASE.
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 4 . 5/18
I like the romantic parts! It's nice to have that in there, now that they're together!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/27
Ugh, why do you try so hard to make your characters so damn hard to like. Still in love with the story, though I can only give you a 7/10 for all the hair I pulled out of my head reading this.
| Elle chapter 34 . 3/1/2014
Goddang it, James. Talk to Lily already! Ya jerk.
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
Break up Sirius and Reilly ,too much of the story is about them
| fiona gold chapter 34 . 2/8/2014
james is being an absolute moron
how could he do that to her
| Guest chapter 44 . 1/31/2014
What a dramaqueen. Riley really doesn't deserve Sirius. He can find someone way better than her.
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/28/2014
I've had it about now with Riley... Can't you just kill her off already?