|Reviews for Kisses on the Balcony|
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/23
OH MY LORDS. WHEN THE HELL WILL YOU FINALLY UNDERSTAND?
LILY EVANS MADE BY J.K ROWLING IS A PERFECTLY CONFIDENT, CHEERFUL AND SELF-ASSURED YOUNG WOMAN AND NOTHING LIKE THIS WEAKLING YOU HAVE IN YOUR STORY. RILEY IS FAR BY THE STRONGEST CHARACTER, THAT'S WHAT LILY SHOULD HAVE BEEN. YOU SEEM VERY IGNORANT OF THE FACT THAT LILY'S INNER NATURE WAS LIKE HARRY'S. HARRY WASN'T SUCH A WEAKLING. LILY IS HONESTLY JUST SUCH A BORE IN THIS STORY. YOU ARE A HORRIBLE WRITER.
| Guest chapter 55 . 9/22
He shit his eyes? Typo...
| rl94 chapter 23 . 7/17
Ugh can't cope with Sirius and Riley being so hot and cold and damn it Sirius why did you do this?!
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/9
I need Sirius and Riley to be together. I just cried. You have amazing writing skills for making me feel this way! PLEASE.
| Rowena Pendragon chapter 4 . 5/18
I like the romantic parts! It's nice to have that in there, now that they're together!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/27
Ugh, why do you try so hard to make your characters so damn hard to like. Still in love with the story, though I can only give you a 7/10 for all the hair I pulled out of my head reading this.
| Elle chapter 34 . 3/1/2014
Goddang it, James. Talk to Lily already! Ya jerk.
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
Break up Sirius and Reilly ,too much of the story is about them
| fiona gold chapter 34 . 2/8/2014
james is being an absolute moron
how could he do that to her
| Guest chapter 44 . 1/31/2014
What a dramaqueen. Riley really doesn't deserve Sirius. He can find someone way better than her.
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/28/2014
I've had it about now with Riley... Can't you just kill her off already?
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/27/2014
I HATE RILEY! How about more James and Lily and less of that stupid bitch? Maybe you could kill her off sometimes soon? That would make the entire story so much better! She is totally ruining it and without her it would be really awesome. I think I've never hated a character that much before.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/27/2014
Riley is such a dramaqueen. Everything that happened is her fault and she deserved it. God, I hate her, she is such a weak character.
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/26/2014
They broke up finally! I couldn't be happier. I really hate Riley and she deserves much worse, she was such a bitch towards Sirius. I feel bad for him, though, beacuse he liked her, I don't really know why, but he deserves someone better than that asshole. James should be comforting Sirius and not that skank. She doesn't have one good thing about her and she doesn't deserve Sirius at all. I really hope they don't get back together.
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/26/2014
I really like the story but I really hate James and Sirius fighting, I think James would never treat Sirius like that, and he shouldn't, especially for Riley. They more than just best friends, they are brothers, and they would never let a silly girl get between them. I relly don't like Riley, she is my least favourite character, she is getting in between James and Sirius and I think Sirius deserves better. I really like James and Lily together, and all the scenes where they are all together.