|Reviews for Savin' Me|
| Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Man I want more of this, although you need seprate paragraphs for different people talking, need more discription, keep up the good work
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
a pimp beat up masataka? and now hes got a personal whore? huh.
| gunman chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Alright. I read this story a while back but I never reviewed it. Sorry about that.
This said, I liked this story alot. The only issues I have are that it could have used some editing.
Most of your character-speaking sentences are running together in the same paragraph. It's a little tough to read as well as knowing who is talking.
That aside it was good to see a story where Masataka is the hero and actually gets the girl. Though Masataka calling the girl Kokoro was nice, giving her a name, I couldn't help but wonder why he did that.
I don't think you gave an explanation as to why that particular name or it's meaning.
And seeing the Juken Club's reaction to the whole thing was funny to read.
Anyway, this was a good story. Keep up the good work.
| FatesDecision chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Hi this is a good story...Finally some Masataka fanfictions! I hope you make more xD Hes an important character and yet he is neglected [...but after reading this it gives me some hope that he will be just as important as everyone else maybe even more...But yeah great story! I hope you make more Masa fics! xD
| Issi Targaryen chapter 1 . 12/4/2007