|Reviews for A Coyote's Memory|
| Lord-Strath chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Really like the poem , wouldnt change anything other then the last line to *Died* instead of die. But i really love the perspective and the image it creates
| Spirit Seer chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
"And then I die" That was slightly abrupt, but it was still good. :)
That reminds me of a poem that I wrote and showed a couple of friends, and they both got a kick out of how I was going on with a sorta happy feeling then broke the mood with a "morbid" line, "break your neck and die". LOL That's what this reminded me of. Great poem again!