Reviews for The White
Do Not Feed The Author chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
The narrator is a Magneton, right? Cookies please? oo On another note this is a very good idea of what it might be like when the batteries die.
Aqua059 chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
...Aw. I HATE low batteries. And I can only imagine your frustration at having them cut out...RIGHT-IN-THE-MIDDLE-OF-A-FRIGGIN-BOSS. Gah. -flail-

Poor Magneton...never got to finish its fight...D:
ScytheRider chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I must have missed this on my first passthrough.

This got a laugh from me, especially since I had the same thing happen once. It was after a Zero Isle mission in PMD2 and I was having Xatu open all my boxes. Screen turned white. BAH!

You just gave me the idea of writing a really long, dark, serious Pokemon saga simply called "Power", which ends with the shocking twist of the batteries going out. Hahah.
Mainiac97 chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Magneton was the pokemon. ) Can I have my cookies now?

Very descriptive, when I'm playing DS in the house I tend to plug it in to keep stuff like that from happening.

Also, you rated this K. For the F word, you should have rated t T. But that is my opinion.

Very good story on the whole.

Until next time, toodles!
Night Rain Illusion chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Why was I giggling like an idiot while reading that "Fuck! The batteries!" line?

Either way, this was good.

And I believe the narrator is a Magneton.
Erisna chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
I guess Magneton. 3