|Reviews for Five Days of Midnight
| CELMYAEPYEN.06 chapter 18 . 2/17/2023
It was a great read! The personalities of Ash, Misty, Brock, etc. were so well characterized and that definitely filled me with nostalgia.
I know that this fic was finished thirteen years ago, but I had to leave a comment, the narrative and the originality of the story were magnificent, thank you very much for making such a good story, which today can be enjoyed. A hug, I hope you are very well.
PS: I apologize in advance, in case something in this text is not so coherent, I am using Google translator for this hahahaha.
PS 2: The only thing that kept me wondering was Team Rocket, in the end… What happened to them? Did they really leave like nothing? If so, what the hell hahahahaha
| arcawrites chapter 18 . 10/21/2020
Well, I know it's been ten years, but I had a sudden burst of nostalgia for something I used to love and read through all of this in the last two days. I figured it deserved a review on the off chance you might see it and know that all the work you put into this is fic appreciated, even a decade later!
You're a wonderful writer and the way that you crafted the plot and Lucinda and worked in the gym leaders and Team Rocket was just fantastic.
I loved the way you wrote Ash and Misty's relationship so much. It was so beautiful and it just felt so natural to who they are. I adored the way neither of them ever downplayed how important Brock and their other friends are to them, while still acknowledging that there was something different and special about the way they felt about each other.
Thank you so much for writing this. It really was a wonderful read!
| juaniu1994 chapter 18 . 1/9/2020
It was excellent. You should write more pokemon stories. Greetings from Argentina.
| thelittlepandagirl chapter 18 . 10/5/2018
This is the best Pokemon fic I've ever read! The adventure was so thrilling and I love that each of the trio helped beat Lucinda. Actually a lot of them helped. Lucinda is still a mystery to me and the backstory was a bit 'meh' for me. But I loved everyone in this fic, especially the gym leaders together.
And ugh at Gary ruining the moment lol.
| Conan.212 chapter 2 . 8/2/2018
This guy has the same name like Prof Oak.
| suttonrose chapter 18 . 1/17/2018
Thank you so much for this fic! This is one of the best I've ever read! I got so sucked in and stayed up late into the night to finish! I hope to see more like this from you in the future (like maybe that sequel you mentioned!)
| starymoon chapter 18 . 1/6/2017
Oh my god Thanks for this story it was so perfect and sweet ... Just hope to see more aaml from you. Thanks again.
| Enchanted Hats chapter 18 . 5/24/2016
Still one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.
| Enchanted Hats chapter 12 . 5/24/2016
To this day, this remains one of my favorite pokemon fanfictions of all time. It holds up to time and proves to be even more enjoyable than I remembered it being.
I LOVED how despicable Lucinda is. Killing another for Sabrina's failure, absolutely brilliant and cruel. It's the kind of ruthless manipulation I love from excellent villains.
The characters are spot on. And although I can't quite see Ash as 16 in this story, I definitely can see Ash and Misty in this adventure. All of the characters in fact. It plays out like a movie when I read. And I can't stop reading.
I think the main problem with imagining Ash as 16 is that these events are right after Pokemon 2000, so I think that's what's making it hard for me to see Ash as older. But whatever the case, it doesn't make this story any less enjoyable. Wonderfully crafted. Beautifully written. I'm off to finish. I just had to gush about how much I loved this chapter.
| cosette141 chapter 18 . 5/15/2016
This was an incredible story! Great plotting and I loved the romance between ash and misty 3 also, team rocket showing up at the tower? BEST TWIST EVER! Your characterization was spot on and you made me stay up until 3am reading this all day. Thank you for all of the effort and time you put into writing and finishing this:) it was so so worth it!
| NitroChji 240 chapter 18 . 5/11/2016
I'm quite impressed with you! You did quite a good job on the story, and I'm glad you waited till there end to add the whole romance thing in! Encore! *clapclapclap* on and also is funny how you named Lucinda Lucinda, considering it means dawn, but you meant that, didn't you!
| NitroChji 240 chapter 12 . 5/10/2016
If this already isn't in this series, I think it would be awesome to see Lucinda vs Mew and Mewtwo
| Kina1551 chapter 18 . 2/6/2016
Wow! This story is worthy to be a film. Really, it was sooo good that once while I was reading you story late in night, I thought it was one of the films of Pokemon. It can be only a story, but I will always remember you story as one of the movies of Pokemon.
| Pokeshipper00 chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
Fabulous! So exciting! Love the little hint of Rocketshipping! Btw, I thought the mystery Pokémon was a Purrloin! As its catlike and has yellow markings too! Oh well love it do more!
| nick chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
Here are my 5 questions. 1. Could you be specific on when the fanfic takes place? 2. What locations were used in the fanfic? Be specific. 3. How old was everyone in the fanfic? 4. What Pokémon were owned by the main characters in the fanfic? 5. How long have they owned those Pokémon for? Be sure to answer these questions.