Reviews for Nightfall
INVALID XXX chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
wow i thought that the story was gonna be way different then this but I like it :) very descriptive!
laynsmagicbox chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Fucking-...! Oh my-...! Wow!

It's...perfect. So final and definite...
Insertrandomusername chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Fucking Christ, how can anyone write something as amazing as that? No shit, I don't think I've ever read something that good. At least not Naruto fanfic. This story was just amazing, and it made me cry. I swear to God [Kira, I think we'll say, because I don't believe in God], I'll read this fic over and over again. Because it was really that good. So I love you now.
randomly chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Evil...

This was - and i really love angst and have read to much of it... way too much - one of THE BEST angsty thing's i've ever read.

It was wonderfully written, and so sad... I want to go cry now... :S

You are oh so talented, i envy you!
KareNeko chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Whoa. Awesome.

Once everything they lived to protect is destroyed, the ninjas are still unable to be anything other than what they were bred to be. So they do it elsewhere, even if the purpose is gone, the nobility is lost, and the concept of loyalty is perverted beyond recognition.

And they survive when it might be better not to, because it's their ninja way. Exquisitely painful when applied to beloved characters like Kakashi and Iruka.

Almost surgically applied angst, packing so much into a one-shot. Bravo!
Beff chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Wow, you have some beautiful imagery in there. Very well written, very dark. Regarding some of the content, why would anyone from Konoha have gone to Rock? Wasn't Rock responsible for the last great war, the one where Gai participated in when he was younger (so did Kakashi). I liked it anyways, very interesting take. :D
rowanashke chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh, my god. That was really...really...damn. I can't even find the words. Wonderful and horrible at the same time. The emotion in your story is so raw. It hurts. And I love/hate how you ended it...it's the perfect ending, because how could it be happy? Just, wow. Excellent.
CopyNinAstral chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh, gods.

Well, I'm not one to deny a request for a review, but I really should have stopped when I read your note. Augh, I hate angsty stuffs, but you write beautifully even if it is painful, and I mean emotionally not flow-wise, to read.

The second part did come out better, the end with the sand, very nicely written.

~Astral~