Reviews for P is for Precious Seconds Revised
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
That was very sweet and had me wanting more. You can imagine how happy I am when I found out you have written a sequel to this story. :D
sayatahu chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Going backwards, just read the sequel. Just thought I give you a review for this. Keep writing, dont care what people say, S.
megan157nebula chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Aw! That was so sweet! I just re-read this and thought 'wait-no next chapter?'

I would love to see this story continue-maybe with dialogue? Them meeting at the end of the day, or Don finding the pic on her cellphone, or something. I really like Don/Megan stories, and you really get their characters right.

I could so see Megan taking the picture, and Don kissing her.

"His heartbeat quickened, her peppermint breath was sweet and he was thinking, sorry to that certain person and he made up his mind.

He quickly turned his face and slap dash right on target, his lips touched hers."

She's a lucky woman!
Lisa Paris chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
It was sweet - I love the idea of these two together. They seem to have such a close friendship - it would be nice if it turned into more.