|Reviews for Chunin Exam Day|
| Guest chapter 77 . 3/14
Dear Perfect Lionheart, I ask you to update your fic with a message to convey the news below. Don't let fanfiction become banned!
The following message is directly copied from an author's note by Digitize27:
Something has recently been made known to me in that a new SOPA bill is trying to be passed. If you don't know what that is it is the 'Stop Online Piracy Act'. This may sound like a good thing but in essence it gives certain government moderators the right to indiscriminately delete all fan-related work such as Fan-art, Fan-made videos and more importantly to me and I'm sure you guys… Fanfiction.
There is currently a petition running to try and put a stop to this but currently it requires 100,000 people to sign up to it. It is a very quick process that took me around three or so minutes to do but it needs to be done before March 19. If you guys did so not only me, but I'm sure every author on this site would be very grateful.
To help type in 'Petitions whitehouse gov SOPA 2014' to google and it is the first link; make a quick account and add yourself to the petition. It needs all the help it can get before we can nip this in the bud. I know you guys can help preserve the intellectual property of me and my fellow authors so we can continue to do what we enjoy and bring you stories that you enjoy.
| Guest chapter 77 . 3/13
*points at your review for Invisible Fox, and stammers... finally gets over the stammer*
W!? T!? F!?
YOU'RE NOT ONLY STILL ALIVE AND USING YOUR ACCOUNT, AND COMMENTING ON OTHERS STORIES; BUT YOU REFUSE TO WORK ON YOUR OWN!?
| Yobikir chapter 77 . 3/12
This Story is great.
I admit the romance is pretty much non-existent, but everything else (especially the humor and the World-building) are just great.
to bad it is so close to being finished and it didn't update in such a long time
| YazzyFic chapter 23 . 3/11
It's a weird but decently fun crackfic. I don't like harem stories, and the fact that they're 14 and under is really weirding me out. I originally thought the Groundhog Day premise would be taken more seriously, but yea. Crackfic. I gotcha.
| Awesome.com chapter 77 . 3/9
I loved it!It was a fun fic to read!
| Darkdrago342 chapter 77 . 3/8
This was awesome, nice story
| samusbot chapter 48 . 3/8
"Truly the life of a martial artist is fraught with peril!"
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/8
i do not understand why naruto can't beat kiba when he can beat pretty much everyone he ever comes across in canon
| samusbot chapter 37 . 3/8
Chapter 37 ending AN "Shut up back there or so help me I will drive this car off a cliff!"
| Red Guardsman chapter 77 . 3/7
Excellent work all over! I despair at the discontinuation though. Perhaps money and/or alcohol might sway your mind?
| Red Guardsman chapter 54 . 3/7
G'day. Bloody good work you've done here.
Ebisu's whole spiel about the deeper purpose behind D-rank missions - would you mind if I used that in a future work of mine? It's a better outlook compared to the glorified chores I saw in the anime.
| Futon Lord chapter 1 . 3/5
You are...cruel. To stop writing SO CLOSE to the end!
| Lydia-Hood chapter 16 . 3/2
Seriously... Kakashi gets bashed in this story but Kiba get praised? Kiba is an idiot, he might have some combat skills, but he lacks the brain to make a optimal use of them, his sister and mother were probably far better Genin as his age than him since they don't seem to lack the brain he does, so seriously, Kiba didn't deserve to be a Chunin, Hell, seriously he was praised for his 'skills' yet like every other clan members he is a one trick pony, he relies on Inuzaka clan techniques and his dog to fight, remove either and he lose half his strength, remove both and he is nothing.
Seriously outside Shikamaru & Naruto, nobody else deserved to be Chunin amongst the Konoha 12. Ino & Chouji are too limited in skills and lacking the brain, Lee lacks brain and flexibility, Neji & Tenten lacks flexibility, Sakura lack practical skills and chakra power, Sasuke lacks flexibility, Kiba lacks brain & flexibility, Shino & Hinata lacks flexibility. Every clan members rely on bloodlines and clan techniques, Sakura have brain and nothing else, Lee got physical prowess and nothing else. Shikamaru while he relied on clan techniques was still smart enough to outdo an opponent that thru his brain, so while he did too lack flexibility, the skills he did have and his flexibility were able to salvage him. Naruto had skills, flexibility, and somewhat of the brain, less a technical brain and more of a practical brain, what mostly hurt Naruto the most thru the series was the unwillingness of his teachers to really teach him anything much useful in the field, Jiraiya did a bit of the work Ebisu did here and helped Naruto master the basics skills, get more intelligence related skills, rather than anything combat viable and also helped his general knowledge, which while useful for a Ninja would be useless against Akatsuki & Orochimaru.
| Mr. Frustrated chapter 52 . 3/2
Hold on, WTF? Why the hell are Naruto's wives deciding who the fuck he gets to marry? If Naruto wants to marry a girl, he'll marry them. If Naruto DOESN'T want to marry Sakura, he shouldn't marry Sakura, and if he is even slightly sane he won't. I liked this a lot at the beginning, the idea of Naruto getting better, but now...? Now it's just become the same old thing. Naruto getting bossed around by his wives, and while I get that's how marriage is, it's fucking bullshit to have that be THE ENTIRE STORY. It's basically not even a story about Naruto anymore, it's about a bunch of wives who have a husband who does everything for them. I mean, not ONCE have they tried to learn something of their own initiative. Either Naruto teaches them, or Naruto has them go to someone else for training! In my opinion, it should have stopped at Hinata, hands down. No Ino with her holier-than-thou, no Tsunade who does nothing, no background support Shizune, no Anko just being Anko (she's better as a friend), no Tenten who's only talent is weapons but has no personality, and no Temari who contributes nothing. The ONLY one I'd keep besides Hinata would be Kin, because she would actually fit.
In total, you've lost sight of the story, turning it into a bunch of girls being pampered and ordering their husband around. The best thing you could do is kill a bunch of them off (say, an argument causing Hinata to revoke their memory regaining privileges, shoving them out of the reset).
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/28
Wow, it's nice to see that I'm reading from a FAMOUS author! ;-)