|Reviews for Bedtime Story|
| Aeriths-Rain chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
aww thats adorable!
| MsRainey chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
| Kaj-Nrig chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
Blah, I've been too long in reviewing a story of yours.
I like this story mainly because it shifts the focus from the characters we're used to reading about. Of course, it could have focused on the guy on 44th Street, and it would've worked seamlessly, given the technical and artistic skill you have and employ.
It's short, but it serves its purpose well. I think any longer would've made it lose its charm.
| See No Dum-Dums chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Aw! Such a touching daddy-daughter story!
I like how you portray Barret's tender side. So much for a big guy with a gun for a hand!
| DreadlordTally chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Well crafted and really sweet without being sappy. :)
| big fan of cloti lol chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh my god,that was so cute! Not many people write stories about Barret and Marlene ya know,that was just totally sweet,Marlene being a daddy's little girl and all...gaah I just sat there 'aw'ing all the way when I read it. Great job!
| NRGburst chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Aw! That's so cute!
It's nice to read a story starring Barret for once. Well done!