Reviews for Spira Mirabilis
Guest chapter 10 . 4/5
I really enjoyed it. But I noticed it hadn't been updated in quite sometime. It will be continued right? Please please continue! Its really good to be left hanging like that!
Laura chapter 2 . 3/28
This chapter was all kinds of awesome! Poor Light doing the gruntwork, who knew? Loved the glass slipper line.
Laura chapter 1 . 3/28
AHHHHHHHHH, WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THIS?

I'm seriously about to start crying! This is so sad! But, I love it.

:D

Can't wait to see what comes, I love the fact that Naomi and Penber will have parts to play. Thank you for writing!
Crazy reviewer chapter 9 . 2/13
Holy shit... ! I thought of not reviewing but if i dnt review now i wud probly die..damn..this chapter 9...the last 2 lines...O MY GOD..i tore out some of my hair nd kept punching my table till my hand hurt..it was GORGEOUS! I..i..damn..(faints..)
lokithehotty chapter 10 . 12/23/2015
I loved L and Light in this! It was so good
Serahne chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
So... you will probably never udpate it but i read everything and it's one of the most compelling Death Note fanfiction i've read :) Really you guys made an awesome job with it 3
erikablair chapter 10 . 8/17/2015
I don't know why you haven't updated in so long and frankly it makes me devastated as it is really good. I hope one day you decide to start this back up again
Guest chapter 10 . 5/4/2015
I'm glad they finally met each other "officially"! Poor Light, it's cute but sad that he rings Sayu's phone to update her on his life.
I really enjoyed reading this fic, really interesting idea and I loved the daily cafe interactions between L and Light! It's a real shame there aren't any more chapters for this fic, I would have loved to have read more~
Ai no Maneshi chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
A glass slipper! Gasp! Come back, CindeRaito! Hee hee! 3
kate-sama chapter 10 . 3/19/2015
This story is soo great and promising. Are you ever going to update this? Please update.
Play-doh Akumu chapter 10 . 1/12/2015
This remains a great story. The plot itself is fresh. Smart to start off with a bang, eliminating Sayu and the Death Note in the first chapter. I like these interloping ideas, such as the burn and how Light hides it, and how Prometheus may or may not be posing to strike specifically on Sayu's birthday. I appreciated how Matsuda and Light's ambitions to work on the case collided very nicely. And, most recently, how Light keeps Sayu's phone turned on. It's good to see the typical tropes, taken and twisted in new and interesting ways. My biggest regret remains that Light was not in a burn victim recovery mask. I'd have liked his scars to be a bit more apparent. Then again, it does lead to L wanting to undress Light! How can I complain?

From the ANs I gleaned that there are two writers, Nilah and Dante. I recognise Dante because she uses "Light," whereas Nilah uses "Raito." It was ingenious to take two writers, Nilah who is more romantic and Dante who is more literal, and combine forces. It elevated the writing in a fantastic way, making it sound canon and read very realistically. I respect this teamwork a lot.

Thank you for writing this. I read it only because of my girlfriend who rec'ced it to me, and I'm glad I did. She has impeccable taste. It may seem trite to say so, but I do hope that in the future this story is continued.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
7 YEARS SIN UPDATE... O GOD
Teacuppy chapter 10 . 1/6/2015
Such heartbreaking chapter and also heartwarming...

I love their relationship,

and I was also wondering if some kind of Death Note would appear later, if there is a tiny possibility that Lights memories be regained... that would certainly be great twist...

And especially since I just Love L still present obsession with Kira...

It would be great if Light could find out about it... seeing as he discovered almost everything about Light it's only fair that Light knows a few not so pleasant things about Ryuuzaki as well.

BUT I GUESS I'LL NEVER KNOW... DAMN IT

This story has the GREATEST potential ever, and is quite possibly one of the most Amazing Death Note fics...

Why no more?

UPDATE

I'll probably "steal" the Idea from you if this doesn't get continued soon.

WHY ARE ALWAYS THE BEST ONES - ABANDONED
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
What a pity
What a shame that such story gets abandoned...

Just to let you know.. I'll probably 'borrow' your idea... and if it bothers you BETTER finish this by yourself...

it's your fault

you got me hooked on this so much
... damn it and all you ABANDONING AUTHORS YOU'RE SO EVIL

*crying so much *

PLS COME BACK TO THIS EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN STORY
Guest chapter 5 . 12/22/2014
This is a great story, I love the premise, the plot, the characters, etc... Everything EXCEPT L and Light's interactions.
Where most of the other character's interactions with Light seem normal and fluid, L and Light's conversations and thought processes when thinking about each other seem very stilted and unnatural. Also, there tends to be a little POV switching during those kind of scenes.
Oh, and Matsuda seems to be a little TOO hero worship-y of Light, remember that it's been a while so he's quite a bit older than he had been during the first part of Death Note - and so, probably a little more mature.
Other than that, I'm really enjoying this story.
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