Reviews for white day
AnimeRose93 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
it was a very cute oneshot :)
ShokoraNushi chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
OMFJ! I luved it! Plz continue with your awsomeness creativeness storynessessessess! ~LU~
DJ chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
cherrypudding chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
omgosh that was so cute! i loved it! well done! hope you write more like this!
chancharan chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Awesome one shot...
harley944 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008 was so cute...please make a sequel
HiN4-cH4n chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
*stars in eyes* KAWAII! Hinata rulez! She's so cute! I love her! Sasuke is cute... but.. slightly... freaky. He didn't even know the girl! Big reason why she calls him Sasuke-SAN ... damnit still it is so cute!
kenshinlover2002 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
That great, I guess that means she doesn't have a crush on Narto.
Bookish Cupcake chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
I didn't like it, but how was I suppose to know unless I read it? Honestly, I only read up to the kissing part, before scrolling down to the review button.

Some tips xD ('cause being a better writer is downright awesome)

-Capitalize people's names. You did capitalize some, but only a few...

-Stay in character. If you would edit a few parts, take out some, and add a few, I think it would be better. It can be believable if you try _~
lala's world chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
it was cute.