Reviews for Spontaneous
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Adorable! :)
VampireAreej chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
that was good! :)
zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
hahah cute!
neon kun chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
"I want to bite Hinata too!"

EPIC LINE. :)
Lila Paige Rose chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
ouch, my tummy. laughter is too hard to bear. xD

make more!
SynysterVamp chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Naruto I want to bite Hinata too! He's so clueless!
ribbons-paws chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
That. Was so. Hilarious! :))
candyluver chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
LOL that was so weird, yet so funnyxD I love it!
xSushii chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
wow the end is SO surprising and cute :) i really loe it! great job :) cookies to you too!
xSuus chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
I love it, that was really well written.

Funny yet still cute D

Great job ;)

(Sry for my bad English, I'm Dutch)
Bukiyo chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Really cute story :]
Okuyukashii chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
That;s really funny and cute. Good story.
SasuSaku Forever and Ever chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
ROFLMFAO!
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
So sweet, and so freaking HILARIOUS. Completely laughed my ass off at those lines:

Get your hands off—fine, you can use your hands to wipe my tears, but other than that, do not touch me.

What’s with the looks and smirks? Wait— JUST BECAUSE I SAID I DIDN’T WANT EITHER OF YOU IN FRONT OF ME DOES NOT MEAN I WANT YOU TWO BEHIND ME! (the best, really, i nearly died of laughter. XD)

“I want to bite Hinata too! Have fun, Sakura-chan!”

Wow. Simply wow.

YAY! YOU ARE MY IDOL FOR HUMOURISTIC STORIES! :D
The Panda assassin chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
That was so funny. Keep up the good work.
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