Reviews for When You're Older
Kathryn Shadow chapter 4 . 12/16/2007
NewDrWhoFan chapter 3 . 12/11/2007
Sweet :)
Kathryn Shadow chapter 3 . 12/10/2007
Still wanting to cry. You're far too good at this... Meerka!
NewDrWhoFan chapter 2 . 12/10/2007
Y'know, the Doctor had better be careful. . . I remember a whole lot from when I was four ;)
Olfactory-Ventriloquism chapter 2 . 12/10/2007
You do a great job of combining the Rose we all know with the common attitudes and antics of a child. Oh, and the hand-holding is a spectacular reference.
horsemaniac chapter 2 . 12/9/2007
this story is so cute! i love young rose, and how she's so sweet with the doctor :-)
migotka21 chapter 2 . 12/9/2007
Oh, 'a soldier' is Jack. Am I right? Or the Doctor regenerated again?
Lumendea chapter 2 . 12/8/2007
Brilliant! I love the duality of these stories. A very interesting way to tell them.
Kathryn Shadow chapter 2 . 12/8/2007
Merkle! I love this... This is good! Fluff makes me happy!
this account will be dead soon chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Hehe, baby!Rose is so cute! _
cordelia-lear chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I loved the way you wrote her dialogue!
keramim chapter 1 . 12/6/2007

I do not know how old you are nor how much experience you have had with 4 year old children, but the way in which you have Rose speak is more like a 2 year old than a 4 year old. I speak from many years of experience with my own daughters and being a teacher for early childhood (3-4 year old) students.

That being said, let me compliment you on your writing otherwise. I enjoy your stories and find them well written.
NewDrWhoFan chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
So, SO sweet! :)
Kathryn Shadow chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Merkle! Awwness... running out of adequate Gibberish... I've forgotten half the language, it's been a while since I was last there...
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