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marymo9 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
That was smooth. Very smooth. Excellent piece.
Ronnie K chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
I loved this. It was poetic, it had rhythm.

"I mean to say, they were damn liars." I'm still laughing at that. Perfect ending to this story.

Write more!
Blouper chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
You never once state who the characters were, I liked that bit since you had many other hints to say who they were. You showed, not told.

I enjoyed it, and it captured the essence of this relationship very cleanly.
Caramello chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
This was great. I just loved the rhythm of it. And it had some stand-out, memorable lines. Thanks.
animeroxz chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
I liked it. Very well written.
BKK chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Loved it. Very well written and flowed wonderfully. Loved the way you went back and forth between the two points of view. And, since I am completely in the BW/WW camp, I hope you take it as an even bigger compliment.
Browniesprite chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Oh bravo...

You obviously know both characters very well and it shows. This is one of the best "relationship dynamic" fics that I've read.

I look forward to your next one.
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