|Reviews for Men of War|
| Wacko12 chapter 36 . 6/10
what were they driving? a Phantom?
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 25 . 4/7
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 19 . 4/7
Demon. It really suits the MC well. A good trademark for him to be universally known by to all of his enemies. I LOVE IT! :D
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 8 . 4/7
YAYZ! MC IS NOW "THE DEMON" TO THE LOCUSTS! XD
| Was good chapter 25 . 1/29
It was good before your grammar and spelling went to shit. I see errors every 2 or 3 sentences ,and there are often misused phrases or incorrect phrasing everywhere. You don't seem to understand the nuances of English very well. Maybe you should get a beta or a tutor.
| RagingCacti chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
... Ok, dude. I was getting into this, but then you did two things that really pissed me off.
1) You had Cortana reveal herself... shes not that stupid.
1a) The gears brushed it off like it was nothing. REALLY?
2) The Chief told them his name. WHAT? That was reserved for the other Spartan II's, Halsey, and Mendez... nobody else learned their names. Ever. It was each of their most personal secret, and you had the Chief just blurt it out like it was nothing.
Come on, man. Seriously?
| Axcel chapter 4 . 12/4/2014
Why did the Chief knock out those Locust instead of shattering their skulls?
| BbK2442 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Okay, two points:
1. You misspelled "Locust" as "Locus".
2. The GoW helicopters are called King Ravens, not Black Ravens.
Other than that, this chapter's pretty good.
| sonicfighter21354 chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Nice work, but the GOW series ended after the third game, and they're making a fifth Halo game.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2014
You do know halo would be more technologically advanced then gears of war
| death7559 chapter 37 . 12/28/2013
Nowwwwwwwwwwwwww. Oh my god you killed kenny, you bastards!
| death7559 chapter 36 . 12/28/2013
Osama bin brahmin from al chestbreach.
| General Slime chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
So the Gears-verse is Halo in the future huh? Will we see Covenant fighting alongside humanity in this fic?
| A Sandvich chapter 36 . 6/27/2013
I feel as if this story still hasn't been completed yet. It leaves off when MC joins the squad in the helicopter. Personally I was expecting them to somehow fix the UNSC Frigate and send MC back. The ending somehow... disappoints me. Hope you will consider editing the story and continue on to achieve a more satisfying ending.
Other then that great story sir
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 17 . 2/11/2013
I love how you portray the chief not only is he a man of few words but his words are simple and straight to the point!
You should have given chief a energy sword!