Reviews for Cave of Evil
Raberba girl chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
I think the main thing is that it simply reads as a prose version of the comic, which is kind of boring if there's no pictures and you already know the dialogue. I'd suggest changing the POV to first person, which might make it easier to give this a more unique flavor, especially with Largo's chapter. You could do some good things with that, trying to paint the world as he sees it.
megatfreak chapter 2 . 9/22/2008
Wow. Just, wow. That was really good! *adds to fave story list*

Thanks for the awesome story!
Aviantei chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
you did a nice job. i was switching between the comic and your fanfiction to see how it compared i like reading this version of things you should do some more. :)
Licking Pennies chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
You did a great job putting all of it in text like that. I'd like to see you do more work, especially with Megatokyo works. I love Megatokyo, but I seriously don't think any of my works would work. So, I would like to watch you flourish. You did well.