Reviews for Confidant
Laeona chapter 4 . 11/5/2016
I loved these stories, especially the fourth chapter. You did an amazing job hitting at the heart of these characters. Bravo!
shelshokd chapter 4 . 7/21/2016
Awww... This fic was so beautiful! Loved all the brotherly interaction in this story, every sweet, funny, annoying and heart wrenching bit of it! You thoroughly understand everyone's personalities and expertly open up a thoughtful glimpse into some of the difficulties the turtles experience in their lives.

Would love to know more about this Rikki girl! If you ever need an idea for another story, a DonxRikki story would be intriguing, jus sayin!
Really insightful work, great job!
SexiiFoxii chapter 4 . 7/1/2016
This is so cute and adorable and heartwarming and cute and fluffy. It's disgusting! Lol anyways I love how Mikey was there for Donnie.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28/2016
gahhh I love this, there's so much brotherly bomding and I'm a sucker for it
FearlessLeader-Leonardo chapter 4 . 4/25/2016
Awww! Omg just too too cute XD
roxygoth chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Read all the chapters and they are all amazing. Love v last 1. Donny and Mikey bonding always makes my heart melt. Roxy
Yomi-Shiki chapter 4 . 5/1/2015
loved your fic...full of brotherly turtle love 333
Firebird Scratches chapter 4 . 2/11/2015
I just love them so much, especially the way you write them. Mikey is such a good brother.
Lyneel chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
lovely :) It's all well-written and engaging. It's clear that you have put a lot of thought into the dialogues, problem solving. Great work! :)
princessebee chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
This was a beautiful chapter in terms of the interaction between them. Perfect handling of Mikey... that maturity he is definitely capable of that goes along with his sensitive heart... and then of course the utterly brilliant and smooth transition into wise-cracking Mikey that cheers poor Don up.

Your handling of Donnie is always perfect.

Although I empathise with the idea of love-lorn Don, I feel like I couldn't really connect with the Ricki story because of not having met her, not having seen enough background established to their relationship ( Though the note about Don's anguish over never being able to truly live in a scientific community was keenly felt)... she felt more like a plot device to aid your objective in writing this fic than a real character.

That criticism aside, it was still a really awesome fic and a masterfully written chapter.
princessebee chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Yes, more great stuff...I was somewhat let down by the Sarah McLachlan thing, though the porn confusion got a big LOL out of me... I think maybe I was expecting this story to tie into the previous two chapters... but nonetheless, it was still awesome and enjoyable to read and more great brotherly interactions. I love awkward Raph, convincing himself he doesn't have to ask for help... 3 and I love that you show Raph very accurately as not being one to shirk from a challenge... any challenge... he won't give up, he'll at least give it a go.

I didn't comment much on your depiction of Mikey so to add here... I love it. I love that you get Mikey's sweetness. As brash and annoying and thoughtless and crude as Mikey can be, at his core he is just a lovely guy and I need to see that. I love that he was on the verge of tears about his fib. He's so full of feelings and so willing to show them.
princessebee chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Again, beautiful interaction and wonderful handling of Leo. He's a perfectionist but the truth about perfectionists are that we never believe we can ever achieve the perfection we so desire and it tooooooortures us! I love Leo's own humility and fragility being displayed here - I hate it when writers depict him as completely arrogant and self-righteous, it's just not him. He is haunted by a need to always Do The Right Thing and won't go any easier on himself than his brothers. ALSO: that gorgeous sly Leo sense of humour that comes in at the end here... so perfect! 3
princessebee chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Beautiful interaction between the two brothers here... super stuff.
Vilsy chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Hiyo! I particularly enjoyed this chapter as I am something of a Michelangelo - Donatello brotherly buddies fan. You know, Leo and Raph have their issues/understandings with each other, so I like the idea that Mikey and Donnie have a close relationship so none of them feel left out or alienated. I guess I got that from the old 90s movies, anyway.

In any case, I think you characterized them both very well and I enjoyed your prose and dialogue. Excellent work!
Lina03 chapter 4 . 12/20/2009
I love this story. You have written a wonderful and believable scenario with a very natural and emotionally beautiful dialogue while keeping them all in character. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work! _
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