Reviews for Treasures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding work. The evolution of Simon's character was quite enjoyable and believable. It was good to see these two old friends reconcile one final time, each resigned to the other's chosen path in life even though theirs would never again intersect (although come very close once a year.) MJE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! I searched for this because I forgot to fav it and wanted to show it to a friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well for one I absolutely despised the epilogue time skip. So thanks for writing one last Hurrah before Simon disappears. The Simon/Yoko undertones were just a bonus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I liked this, good job, even if this is old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this totally made me cry! i absolutely love this, its so well done. simon's so grown up and mature... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was almost as awesome as Chuck Norris. Almost o_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw beautiful totally made me tear up in the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to think they eventually had a reunion once a year or every several years and/or reunited after living for so long. We do see that they age in the epilogue but Simon's right eye spiral made me think he might've become immortal/long living like Lord Genome and lived for a long time. If that was because he was the ultimate Spiral entity I could only guess, but I'd like to think that it's because they battled the Anti-Spirals and gained the knowledge for the next step to evolution. All of them who fought on/as Tengen Toppa on the final battle. :) Boota is still alive after twenty years, isn't he? And Leeron didn't look old like the rest of them either. This is a nice companion to the epilogue. Kind of like a mini-epilogue inside the epilogue. I wanted Simon to toss the ring back to Yoko when she tossed it to him. You fulfilled that wish. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This gave me goosebumps and made me a little misty-eyed. ;_; That was great! I felt a sense of closure and I really loved it. Thank you for writing this. ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be perfectly honest, the story brought a tear to my eye. You captured their personalities perfectly. How Yoko found Simon, very well done. How Simon reacts fits well... I could clearly see this as an 'epilogue's epilogue.' I especialyliked how you ended it. As you quite clearly show how Simon was over shadowed by everyone else. The Good looking charismatic leader- Kamina The rugged bravely brave man who selflessly sacrificed himself to save everyone- Kittan and the kind, strong, good-hearted, passionate boy- Simon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I really liked this story...the writing is also very good...I only wish I can write like that...sign |
![]() ![]() ![]() ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! Y_Y Simple, clean style... yet very powerful! Perfect Gurren Lagann fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS A GREAT STORY |