Reviews for A Long Nine Months
cherrishish chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
you know that Ed was basically a major due to being a state alchemist, higher ranked than a 1st lieutenant (Hawkeye) so he wouldn't be saluting her nor would she tell him to be at ease
Princcess0123 chapter 10 . 7/12/2012
AWWWWWW! I love the ending :')
Aleixi chapter 2 . 10/2/2011
This is looking to be an interesting story. And regarding your author comment at the bottom, how does chocolate milk explode? I always thought of it to be a rather safe substance...
Wow chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
I'm in love with this story! When Winry said she had fingernails, I immediately thought of the movie Juno. Have you seen it?

Sue "Your baby has a beating heart you know! It can feel pain! And it has fingernails!"

Juno "Fingernails? Really?"

*Sue nods*


HA I friggin LOVE that movie! I think I like this story even more! Great job!
xazavier009 chapter 10 . 2/20/2010
Don't Call Me Short chapter 10 . 1/23/2010
Yippee! I really liked this story. You nearly made my heart skip a beat when Winry almost died but I forgive you! ha ha! Yip yay for 18 year olds from Chi town! (oh and I loved to RoyxRiza hint!)
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 3 . 8/31/2009
hahaha! that's a weird craving...but i heard some pregnant women have even weirder cravings than that...hehehe...ooh boy, edward, good luck with that...
BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
ovaltine? hahaha! i miss drinking that! hehehe...

roy's funny here...he still can't get over that the fullmetal pipsqueak managed to "make" a baby...

ed: WHO ARE YOU CALLING A PIPSQUEAK? *series of long "short" rants follow afterwards...*

oops, my bad...sorry ed...

anyways, on to the next chapter!
Lovelace chapter 10 . 7/25/2009's a GREAT story..

love it.. Keep on writing.. _
Ritsu Kaiori chapter 10 . 3/6/2009
AW! I love it!
Seirin chapter 10 . 12/2/2008
A cute, nice story;) I like i t very much
StrgateAtlantis1 chapter 10 . 11/15/2008
Yay! I really loved it, I didn't want it to be over! But it is... *gloom* But really, nice job on this. I've read some like this that just weren't able to pull it off. But hooray! U did! U should be very proud of yourself. *smiles, and pretends to shake your hand* *but then frowns when no one shakes back* *cries* Thumbs up anyway! *sobs*
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 10 . 10/29/2008
great chapter, and great story. hire's an idea write a sequal, occuring nine months after the end of this story, where kaylee is an extremely accomplished SEVILIAN alchemist, and entertanes her little brother/sister with her skills, and she desides against performing human alchemy, to avoid requiring any automail limbs. it's your choice to make.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 9 . 10/29/2008
great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 8 . 10/29/2008
! great chapter.
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