Reviews for Bring On The Thunder
holymolypumpkinspice chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
Poor Reggie! Poor Lars! Why would Sammy do that? I don't like psycho bitch Sammy. But overall, I love this story.
littlelil1991 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
I liked it even though I feel that it could have been better if you made it longer and broke it into sections, still it was good. I can't see Sam shooting anyone but with the situation you placed him in it was more possible. Great story :)
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I don't know where I'm getting this sudden obsession with Lars and Reggie. But I'm glad I did, because this was so sad!
Aderin-Rakasha chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
You NEED to write another chapter! i was waiting to see if, A, sam dies, B, what the other people do when they find out that Lars is out of the coma. Here are some ideas if you want them/

1, Twister and Otto come in, right as Reggie goes to sleep and Twister gets all happy!

2, Reggie has a nightmere about sam, and Lars helps her through it.

3, Lars gets out of the hospital and Sputz, Pi, and Animal find him, and try 'womping' him, and Reggie beats the chit out of them.

if you want more ideas, just ask. or i could write it for you.

JUST MAKE MORE!
doireallyhave2putinaname chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
luved it! so sad, so sweet! wonderful!
thomas chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
in the next few chapters thomas twist & sam and otto was sitting in ray's den and reggie vwas thinking to herself i wonder how lar's feeling she said to herself and otto said i have an idea sis and reg what's your idea well if you're that worried about lars maybe we can go & visit lars in the hospital if that will make you feel any better said otto and then reg said thanks rocket boy you're the best bro in the world and otto said yea i know sis now i'll call thomas & twist to see if they want to go and see lars said otto and then otto said i talked to thomas & he said that he would be delighted to see lars well that's good but what about twist asked reg and otto said no dice twist still refuses to go see his bro like that in the hospital well just give twist a lil time ok otto said reg
tai takamaru chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
will otto & lars talk to eachother in the hospital room and will they become bestfriends and will reggie & lars ever get together and let me be in the story
Totally-T3ii3 chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
I love it. I love it so much if I loved it anymore I'd be smothering it.

And that reminds me of the song "Smother Me" by The Used

which could aslo be a song dedicated to these two

I tell ya this was NOT a pairing I liked until this story. Oh-my-God! :D

Good job I love you- I love this story- I love Lars/Reggie

amazing :D
LiL-Princess-Of-Death chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
aww this was sad and cute but poor sam even though he shot lars lol well any way amazing story!
daisy617 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
I love it. Sam seems like that to me too. He's a psycho ;)

Great job! So awesome!
jewel-shards chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
kya, this was great! sheesh I'm so glad Lars didn't end up dying! You should make another oneshot or add a chapter onto this.
TiffanyM chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
awesomeness ]
Defying Gravity Elsa chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
This was good...I like the L/R pairing and you write very well...lots of detail without writing the Bible, tons of imagery and feeling. But Sam was extremely OOC. And Otto was a bit too by him crying...and at the beginning, you said "I hate him, and his parents, well they're on a cruise." I thought you were talking about Sam's parents, not Lars's. You needed to be more specific. Also a couple typos. And it would've been nice to figure out how and when Lars stopped being a bully, ya know? Nothing wrong with making him sweet, I have done that too in my many L/R fics (under my old name) but it just needs an explanation with it. But this was still pretty good, I liked it, just those couple of things. Keep writing :D