Reviews for The Bracelet
Isabella120 chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
please update soon!
Crowley Black chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
I like it so far can't wait to see what happens.
outlinedsilver chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
oh I like it.. :) I wanna noe wat happens next!
Hermione's BOY chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
nice ending
A fan chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Oh! I'm intrigued. Write on!
ellehciM chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I can't tell you how excited I am about this story, it looks like it has a lot of potential! And you totally fooled me with Nott. Seriously, earlier on I was like "why doesn't she just say Malfoy's name, it's not like she's going to trick us into thinking it could be anyone else." Foot in mouth.
RdheadGirl chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I think this is going to be a great story! You've definitely set the scenes very well, and the characters.. It's also great to see a story with Draco not Headboy (kind of over-rated I think), Nott sounds like a good choice!

heheh, I'm also curious as to what Draco said :D

Looking forward to the next chapter! :]
en-rose-fraise chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Hi!

First of all, I have to say it sounds pretty good. I think you kinda overdid her known-it-all appearance. I was also expecting wittier comenbacks and a much more intelligent Draco Malfoy. I absolutely love the idea of Theodore Nott being the Head Boy. I like her example of diplaying fairness, but I think that it was a bit exaggerated as well.

Overall Really good! Looking forward to the next chappie!

Sharon Aurora
dancingkatz chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I enjoyed reading this and like the way you set the scene and characters. I would never have thought of Theodore Nott for Head Boy but it works nicely.

Hermione's confusion over the reaction of her classmates was well written as was her character in general. She's definitely the know-it-all here and a bit aggravating and smug, but still a sympathetic character.

I liked the scene in the charms classroom very much, the interactions and participation of the less familiar students was nice. What was it Draco said to Daphne, anyway? I'm just as curious (or it could be clueless) as Hermione.

I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. You have a nice wirting style and this looks to be a fun to read fic.

Dancingkatz
ChristinelovesPhantom chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
yay!

i cannot wait for more. You are doing a fine job so far. At the beginning I think there was a spelling mistake but that is fine. okayy!
Dragon Fire10 chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Weird...I tried to review and it told me I already had. gr...anyway...Just as good as the first time I read it! *giggles madly*
mivums chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
more please! :)
Haraldzidla chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
i really liked this chapter, i liked how you showed the characters. Please write more want to hear how this turns out seems to be another great story

Harald x
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