Reviews for Konoha Exiles
Guest chapter 46 . 8/11
Hey I saw you were trying to tie in some LOTR with the swords ya cunt don't tie in LOTR with an anime fanficton it just ruins the fic
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10
R u fookin retarded m8 ya don't jeest put een an oc and sey that narooto and the oc have e relation sheep ya cunt
Yolieyy chapter 55 . 7/10
seriously its not fair i mean Naruto worked very hard for that weapon and Sasuke just came and stole it like doesn't that dude have anything original all his jutsu were copied from someone else
Fire ball jutsu copied from his clan chidori copied from kakashi
like literally all his jutsu came from someone else im not saying clan based jutsu are rippoffs but sasuke really does not have originality and creativity
Guest chapter 55 . 7/10
seriously its not fair i mean Naruto worked very hard for that weapon and Sasuke just came and stole it like doesn't that dude have anything original all his jutsu were copied from someone else
Fire ball jutsu copied from his clan
Runadaemon chapter 10 . 7/1
I came out of curiousity over the 'childhood friend'. Satyed for the Venginata. You go girl!
mikkel chapter 69 . 6/22
WHAT THE FUCK NO THIS CAN NOT BE THE ENDING WHAT THE FUCK
Guest chapter 69 . 5/31
Thank you
starwars0411 chapter 69 . 5/2
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Valkerie131 chapter 69 . 4/26
Ok Hi guys, this is my review of the story.

A word of advice, this is my own opinion.
Forgive me of some of my wrong grammar.

*Good way to start the story on the first part (exile). As a reader, it really fired me up on what was going on next.
*Vague background on the OC, Naruto's childhood friend.
*Ok, so I was surprised that the author really dive in to the Kyuubi storyline and stuff. That I can accept, but what I cannot accept is that
the Kyuubi is one of the most powerful, and here I was reading and saw Kyuubi to be underpowered. Mistake there.
*Training part is good, liked it. Time skips are a little bit far but I guess its okay.
*Twas good that you decided to collab the Naruto universe with the Underverse.
*The change in character in Hinata was a definite plus, I love it.
*Really big problem with Sakura though, its like her character does not fit in what role the author gave her. It just feels weird is all.
*Kabuto dead, pretty good. Really hated the guy anyway.
*For Kakashi, I guess it was too much, I was surprised that he had fallen so low. He was like a whole different persona.
Him putting priority on Sasuke was a really big mistake, its not good on the Jonin code I guess. Also, I had grown tired of the
"Kakashi, Jonin turned Genin" always appearing in almost every description.
*Akatsuki dissolved, and other members on the run. Ok now that is a first for me. I think it fits well with the story. Considering how fucked up the situation is.
*This is just my personal opinion, it is about Gai's team. Really? Threesome? I am just concered with their love triangle relationship.
*As the story progresses, some characters that were introduced earlier in the story are not getting much screen time.
*Danzo, and Orochimaru? I could care less.
*Underverse ark. I give an ok. Since that idea was completely new from the author, so the self insert style was acceptable.
*The more I imagine the streets of Underverse, the more I imagine Novigrad from the Witcher 3 Wild Hunt. Clearly has the same vibe.
*I accept Mica and his abruptly new GF Nami. (Before the attack on the Leaf)
*I know it would be a pain in the ass involving every village in this story, but I was quite surprised that the other great Kage's, aside from the Leaf and Sand,
did not offered support or something. If they really were, I was not able to notice.
*Ok so Gaara dead, Shukaku taken from him, revived by Chiyo. The story progression was a little bit too fast in here.
*I was surprised that Itachi was on the Leaf's side. That is a plus there. I like it when some things are unexpected.
*Romance lines are decent.
*Jutsu names are weird.
*Team 7 completely broken, disbanded, OUCH! Well not that it matters anyway.
*Giving the antagonists too much power... tsk! tsk! tsk! Its like this becuase its for the sake of more "DRAMA". *sigh. really?
*I was also saddened that Itachi did not confront and settled the fight between his brother before the attack on the Leaf. But I guess it was necessary for the story to progress.
*For the great span of time Naruto spent training, it was like he was still weak or the bad guys are just too powerful.
*Killing Nami. HORRIBLE HORRIBLE. I do not accept. *cry.
*The sword should have been tied to the owner's soul, not the blood. It felt so bad seeing Sasuke steal one of Naruto's sword. It actually made me stop reading for a while.
*Rin was there? Wow.

*In order to make a really good story and not too much drama, the beginning and the end will always be the impactful ones.
The start of the story was good, it took the reader by storm and made me peak my interest. After that the story tried to keep the momentum rolling.
But sometimes, it comes to a point where it just pauses. Also some of the OC added in this story somewhat lack full description of their appearance, clothing, etc.
Which is really important especially since the characters are heavily involved with Naruto. Sure, adding drama to the mix is necessary for a story like this,
but having too much of it is not good and will disatisfy the reader. The Ending was not as really as impactful as I have noticed.

OVERALL, The story was ok, Twas great at first tho. But it eventually came through. It kinda ticks me off sometimes.

GOOD JOB WRITING THIS STORY
Valkerie131 chapter 53 . 4/25
To be honest, i was pretty pissed off learning Sasuke was able to use one of Naruto's special swords. Not only that but it ruined the good pace of the story progressing to the Gates of Konoha in the reader's viewpoint. Seriously? it would have been good that the swords were bound by the soul, not the fucking blood. :( I am disappointed about this.
Valkerie131 chapter 2 . 4/24
good way to end the story chapter 69 xD
ThePhenoix11 chapter 40 . 3/9
Sigh* this story started out ok but devolved quickly adding an occ to it then making OC basically a main charater Hinayana is ghost rider then bashings all around Naruto into some weird Jedi thing OC gets power up to dragon thing then you give them dis stuff after adding in charaters from Harry potter inuyasha and more I dont know this turned into a cluster fuck five chapters ago.
anthony732000 chapter 69 . 3/5
I was wondering if i could put this on wattpad with ur permission because its a great story and i know others will love it.
Alextroyalen chapter 25 . 2/23
Sorry about that rant last chapter. You probably didn't see either if these but you resurrected my guy Gaara so we're cool
Alextroyalen chapter 24 . 2/23
FUCK YOU KILLING IFF THE JUGGA GAARA. WHAT DID HE DO FUCK YOU IS MY RESPONSE. YOU HAVE DONE DESPICABLE THINGS IN THIS FIC BUT I HELD MY TONGUE BECAUSE OT WAS FOR ENJOYMENT. BUT GAARA YOU NEED TO BURN IN HELL FOR THAT.(end rant)
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