|Reviews for John Meets Eddie|
| mililli chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Loved it haha
| SarahShalomDavid chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This is rather comical seeing as he had an affair with Jolie whilst supposedly with Aniston.
Very good storyline, but could do with more detail within it
| Flower K. Owl chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Interesting. It can be good, but every time the conversation switches to another person, you're supposed to start a new paragraph. paragraph three, (the majority of the conversation) is supposed to be like this:
John relaxed. Being able to talk to someone in the same boat as he was made him feel easier. “I get that all the time."
“Well, thank whoever your surname isn’t Doe! I’m Eddie”
and so on and so forth. you forgot to double space the conversation, but it's easily fixed, along with the few grammar mistakes I see.
keep up the good work! and good story!
| darkest star17 chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
hahaha! i loved it!
you captured Eddie's personality perfectly! the way he's all insecure, and lashes out randomly! he makes me laugh!
now i need to watch mr and mrs smith again just for his part.
brilliant i say!
| kitty luella chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Heh I loved that. It was short and simple but done really well. Great humour.