Reviews for Eight Seconds
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
Do you hate poor little Mikey!?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
I think no I KNOW that this was the worst story has ALWAYS been my favorite.
kittycatpaws chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
so sad but good
Clove15 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
My you rest in eturnel pease Michelangelo.
Babyuknowme13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
OMG. You cock sucker, you killed MIKEY! WHY! CRUEL FATE, WHY?

Great story, you should really consider writing another fic where Leo gets revenge! MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Very good and well done! I loved the night analogy.
Silent Sage chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I'm getting teary! I really enjoyed this fic and it's look onto the death of just a few and brief acknowledgment that many more die everyday. Still, Leo holding Mikey's body just bowled me over. Great fic!
kanah chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
dang. that was awsome!
Rachel McN chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
very good story, I love your descriptions, of to read more of your work!
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Awesome story, Pi. I really liked it. You are a very good writer.

The Bubbly One,

Largely Inconsequential chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
In answer to your question, Hmm, that's a hard one...


I loved it, it was really good.
Joce chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
ohh... ; ; I loved it... it's so sad... poor Mikey... I like how you got Leo's emotions down too... ; ;

Neatsue chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I really liked it and i think you should add a second chapter
Elsiah chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Don't you love it when an idea just hits you? Especially when the result is as fantastic as this. Leo's reflection and epiphany are so moving, and the whole piece is excellently written. Great job!

Alora05 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
I love it. I think it's brilliant how you display the night as a Ninja's mistress. It adds to the chaotic depth of the story; the darkness, but the unwilling understanding. I absolutely love it! The turtle death adds to it; shows you how the 'night' doesnt distinguish between good or bad. It makes it more realistic.

Bravo and a basket full of roses!

Well done. Kind regards,

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