Reviews for Eight Seconds
5Mississippis chapter 1 . 6/12
Beautifully written devastation!
TheRedScreech chapter 1 . 4/2
Well. That just hit me like a train. At first I thought Mikey had found the bodies first but...it was so much worse. "Big brother's here." This line is beautiful. It was all so descriptive. Well written.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Do you hate poor little Mikey!?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
I think no I KNOW that this was the worst story has ALWAYS been my favorite.
kittycatpaws chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
so sad but good
Clove15 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
My you rest in eturnel pease Michelangelo.
Babyuknowme13 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
OMG. You cock sucker, you killed MIKEY! WHY! CRUEL FATE, WHY?

Great story, you should really consider writing another fic where Leo gets revenge! MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Very good and well done! I loved the night analogy.
Silent Sage chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I'm getting teary! I really enjoyed this fic and it's look onto the death of just a few and brief acknowledgment that many more die everyday. Still, Leo holding Mikey's body just bowled me over. Great fic!
kanah chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
dang. that was awsome!
Rachel McN chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
very good story, I love your descriptions, of to read more of your work!
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
Awesome story, Pi. I really liked it. You are a very good writer.

The Bubbly One,

Shell
Largely Inconsequential chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
In answer to your question, Hmm, that's a hard one...

YES!

I loved it, it was really good.
Joce chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
ohh... ; ; I loved it... it's so sad... poor Mikey... I like how you got Leo's emotions down too... ; ;

-Joce
Neatsue chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I really liked it and i think you should add a second chapter
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