Reviews for Of Marriage and Politics
Guardian of Valhalla chapter 15 . 6/8
Note to self into a corner her that kind of stinks note to self go back and rewrite so you can correct the problem that might help you want suggestions I'd be more than happy to take for example the Japanese don't eat eggs and bacon for breakfast look up Japanese tradition weddings and breakfasts is in might help if not just be vague about the breakfast small suggestion because the story has potential if you go back and correct it thank you
DavidC20OfficialWriter chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
well, is about destiny but maybe Naruto and Temari can love eachother...
The question is if they can realize what they feel?
fusioninferno chapter 14 . 12/7/2015
Phew! Talk about a heart attack. Thought Temari died or something. Love it.
Z chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
you really haven't watched much of shippuden have you? Near the end of shippuden the 5 great ninja nations come together and make peace with each other. there is not supposed to be any violence between the nations anymore.
Z chapter 4 . 1/6/2015
none of this is accurate. Temari was well aware that Naruto was a Jinchuriki in the original series before Shippuden. Also, this whole chapter was just awkward. I expect better in future chapters...
Z chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Isn't Jiriya supposed to be dead? Wasn't he killed by Pein?
lazyyoyo chapter 14 . 11/20/2014
Aaaaaahhhhh I see what you did I thought she died for a troll
Axcel chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
I don't see why Naruto would have an issue with Sakura loving Sasuke. She was with Naruto in this fic because she had fallen in love with him for all he has done for her getting her to see him as more than a dope and nuisance. There is nothing wrong with loving more than one person when you are seeing someone so long as you do not act on it. I can see that being said to him being a boner-killer, but nothing more.
godwinedward534 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Guest chapter 14 . 2/26/2014
You... you... You tricked me! XD
tobi chapter 15 . 9/19/2013
I just finished reading this story and even though it was short I really enjoyed it and what had happened also at the ending I was confused when I thought that temarie died but was happy in the end. There wasn't much incorrect spelling so that was a surprise and finally I think I am looking forward to your next naruto story... Love ?tobi? P.s its just a joke so don't take it seriously kk
Franjo chapter 15 . 7/6/2013
Chapter 14 was weird, I tought Temari died by giving birth to the child or so, tanks good it is not so.
Is Naruto sad because he found out who is his mother?
I kinda feel the story is not finished because Temari don't now yet who was Naruto's father.

And i tought that guy that K... guy(I don't not now his name) is a villian and part of that Sato family.
NarutoZeldafan7 chapter 15 . 1/24/2013
When i read the beginning of chapter 14 i was freaking out...i thought temari died! i was getting ready to like cry if i saw him hold his son without the mother nearby. But i liked the story as a whole all together anyways :)
RiKUDO76 chapter 14 . 11/17/2012
man you are an maked me think that this story had a traggic ending...not cool man not cool...
the story is really good though...keep it up dude...peace out!
HNaruto chapter 15 . 11/6/2012
Hey dude, just want to say that was a great NaruTem story. I loved the way you left the cliffhanger in the epilogue making us think that it was Temari who had died. Anyways, this story was great and I'm glad to have read it. CIAO
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