"The Potters and the Longbottoms have been doing stupid things together for centureis. Today's adventure will not change that."

I LOVE IT!

Loving this fic

I do not normally read crossover fanfiction but I have to say I love your story so far and cannot wait to see where it is going! Keep up the excellent imagination...it's great that you have strayed so far from canon, much more anticipation for us readers!

Fun so far. Although I do enjoy a good bash at Snape, I wish more people would make him more than a blank spectator to his own destruction. Snape is a clever bastard, and it kinda breaks suspension of disbelief

Well, this could be entertaining and in parts it is, but...
As often in such stories the reasons for Harry to be in hogwards and to deal with retards, idiots and such there are preposterous and at least for me make the story unreadable. The framework is wrong.
Im out of here.

Love the new chapter, was very enjoyable to see Tracey 's realization that being a part of Harry's life is not a fun prospect. Can't wait to see which girl has the moxie to take that post. Was also fun to see the interactions between everyone after the abduction of the students.

Now to again reiterate my one and only perceived flaw in this story... I Want To See More Mamma Pepper moments. Sorry to say I think so much more could be done on that front, and while I am less upset then my diehard IM buddies over the direction the movies have taken. I feel you could easily do more here with the idea of Pepper the doting mother figure.

Keep up the fantastic work I hope that the next update is faster in its arrival

Hello
I'm not really a Marvel Comix fan, but I'm loving this! What a hoot. Eve being Harry James Potter Stark, he's still Harry. AND I did notice the reference to the Dark Lord of Derkholm. Is that actually from the Marvel-verse. I always thought it was from Diana Wynne Jones... but the meshing of the two stories does make sort of sense.
I really appreciate your creativity and humor. Thank you for your hard work.
I do hope that you will add to (and complete!) this story and I have a chance to pick up on it when you ... maybe I need to find my password so I can login and sign up for a follow.
MHS

Still love it and am always up for the next chapter!

I love the relationship between HP and Tony and the one building with Sirius, I like the more confident Neville. You’ve written Dumbledore perfectly. The ends justify the means for him. He wants to mould HP into a weapon under his control. Agatha Harkness and Amelia Bones taking him down a peg or two is brilliant. And everytime HP smacks him down gets my full approval.

But my one thing… I know this fiction but the way you’ve written how the girls, his friends…
‘Oh by all means, be mad, and make him pay so that he never does it again. We've gotten to him young. As long as we get him properly trained now in a few years when we decide we want a boyfriend, he'll be nicely broken in’…. followed by ‘He's cute and his father's rich, what more could you want?’
Twelve years olds don’t think like that well, unless your pureblood and your parents have taught you to. They don’t usually get interested in boys unless their girly girls.
Well I wouldn’t want friends to say things like that to me. I don’t think it’s funny. Especially since you keep repeating it.
HP has to be aware of so it as Tony Stark and a Potter, so may be a joke to Padma and Hermione but to HP it’s reality isn’t it. He’d want to find someone who see’s Harry not his bank account or fame, and it doesn’t always come across that Padma and Herm see him. Because of their comments I think he’d see them as only friends, not quite trusting that they see more than that. So you’ve basically ended up shooting your lead females and possible love interests in the foot to me.

The way Hermione reacts about She-Hulk is kinda pathetic and childish but she is child so that is an excuse. And the way she acts about the present as if she deserves it. My parents taught me to say please and thank you and not to sulk I would have thought Hermione was taught the same. She’s argumentative and arrogant in the books but at least polite though superior.
And then when Padma spots the mistake in HP’s work I just didn’t like the way they reacted it didn’t feel supportive. And then why they figured out how to fix it the girls gloated, there’s fun and then there’s taking it a little too far. You don’t make a friend feel dumb and go on and on about it.
And the way Herm reacts about Harry spending time with Neville – he’s allowed others friends for Merlin’s sake.
HP because of how he lets them treat him, instead of standing up, he comes across as a doormat for their feet to walk over, I’m all for feminism if that’s what you’re trying but not bitches. The friendship just seems off to me. And you’ve not exactly made them likable in my eyes.

"Just contingency planning for the future." Padma said with a grin He's cute, and his father's rich. What more could you want?" She wasn't joking, and was being a shallow bitch as evidenced by her actions following the talk with Hermione, I hope Harry smacks bitches both male and female...in a painful, non-sexual way.

Padma in this chapter tried to lead Hermione to break Harry, and treats him as if he were of little use except as a toy, and gift dispenser. She even syncs with Hermione into treat Harry like crap, until he hands her a gift!

And Neville, unfaithful boy that he is, lets Harry deal with it alone, just because the girls didn't allow Neville to find out what was happening. No info or neutrality allowed to Neville, because it obviously points out the girls as being very bitchy and irrational. "Abandon your buddy or we treat you like shit too." Neville did so. Spineless and faithless, yaargh!

The headmaster's attempts at dickery were amusing to me, because he never seemed to be on Harry's side the way he acted. This though...it's just too cruel. The people Harry invested in; the people he thought were his friends, betray him over something extremely petty. The girls want to break him over something so selfish. I hope he puts the smackdown on these tricks. Hope he overheard their conversation using his tech, or learns later and smites them.

I love the relationship between HP and Tony and the one building with Sirius, I like the more confident Neville. You’ve written Dumbledore perfectly. The ends justify the means for him. He wants to mould HP into a weapon under his control. Agatha Harkness and Amelia Bones taking him down a peg or two is brilliant. And everytime HP smacks him down gets my full approval.

But my one thing… I know this fiction but the way you’ve written how the girls, his friends…
‘Oh by all means, be mad, and make him pay so that he never does it again. We've gotten to him young. As long as we get him properly trained now in a few years when we decide we want a boyfriend, he'll be nicely broken in’…. followed by ‘He's cute and his father's rich, what more could you want?’
Twelve years olds don’t think like that well, unless your pureblood and your parents have taught you to. They don’t usually get interested in boys unless their girly girls.
Well I wouldn’t want friends to say things like that to me. I don’t think it’s funny. Especially since you keep repeating it.
HP has to be aware of so it as Tony Stark and a Potter, so may be a joke to Padma and Hermione but to HP it’s reality isn’t it. He’d want to find someone who see’s Harry not his bank account or fame, and it doesn’t always come across that Padma and Herm see him. Because of their comments I think he’d see them as only friends, not quite trusting that they see more than that. So you’ve basically ended up shooting your lead females and possible love interests in the foot to me.

The way Hermione reacts about She-Hulk is kinda pathetic and childish but she is child so that is an excuse. And the way she acts about the present as if she deserves it. My parents taught me to say please and thank you and not to sulk I would have thought Hermione was taught the same. She’s argumentative and arrogant in the books but at least polite though superior.
And then when Padma spots the mistake in HP’s work I just didn’t like the way they reacted it didn’t feel supportive. And then why they figured out how to fix it the girls gloated, there’s fun and then there’s taking it a little too far. You don’t make a friend feel dumb and go on and on about it.
And the way Herm reacts about Harry spending time with Neville – he’s allowed others friends for Merlin’s sake.
HP because of how he lets them treat him, instead of standing up, he comes across as a doormat for their feet to walk over, I’m all for feminism if that’s what you’re trying but not bitches. The friendship just seems off to me. And you’ve not exactly made them likable in my eyes.

I re-read this whole story. Just amazing, like all your work.

The Longbottom Battle Cardigan is hysterical. Does it come from history or comic books, or is it a bit of mischief from that slightly warped, brilliant and comedic mind of yours?

great chapter! update soon!

Greatest. Sorting. Song. Ever. The hat had such verbose wit :D