|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Invincible TechnoMage|
| The Lady Reaper of the Shadows chapter 7 . 4/11/2008
hehehehe knew harry'd win what will dumbles try nxt?
| jupimako chapter 7 . 4/11/2008
super awesome chapter! i loved it :).
| Sarah Riddle Potter chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
Wow! Awesome story. Very interesting. I just love it. You're an outstanding writer. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
| QuicksilverWitch chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
This is a magnificent brainchild story you have here; keep up the ab fab work!
| chineseartist chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
that chapter rocked. can't wait for more.
| Chi Vayne chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
I suppose it is arrogance and to a lesser extent ignorance, rather than sheer stupidity, but in this case they are hard to tell apart. Dumbles, especially, with him seeming to say "Sorry about this little misunderstand, but I hope you still do everything I say" attitude. The 'little things' like taking away all his possessions, and trying to take him away from a father he adores.
I was glad to see Dumbledore nailed on that "greater good" bs.
| rtyyry chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
hey man...this may be the first review i have gotten off my lazy ass to write...and i have to say GREAT WORK dude...keepit up and please post the next chapter as soon as u can...will be watching and waiting
| shinji the good sharer chapter 7 . 4/10/2008
LMAO! Should have given Dumbledore a good beating while you were at it but still very good! I was actually sort of hoping that Agatha, Tony and Steven would have shown up too just to rub it in the faces of Dumbledore and the Wizengamot.
| creatureofthepitchblack chapter 7 . 4/9/2008
loved the Thor appearance, the Shakespearean may have been off but still got the point across nicely. can't wait to see how this'll pan out.
as for the powers comment..i'm inclined to agree that the marvels are slightly underpowered, because we're talking wizarding tangible magic here, therefore the real powerful stuff is what gods and heroes do (like a shield that no matter how hard you hit simply won't shatter-while a wizarding shield would shatter under enough kinetic force).
anyway, good stuff..wish the updates came sooner but..anyway
| Ralph S chapter 7 . 4/9/2008
And here I thought Dumbledore bashing would get old after a while.
Obviously, I was mistarken - ah - MISTAKEN.
Just a little thing I stumbled on... where Thor is asked by Mme Bones if he would kill people doing their jobs he says "Thy make sense" - there's a word, or rather "words" actually, missing.
And then a little later,
- Thy life hung by a thread this day,[...] Harry’s father would truly make thou [ - unless I'm seriously mistaken, this should be thee ] pay for what thou have [ hast ] done. Be thy [ Thee, too, I think ] very glad thou only had [ hadst, I think the word is, but I'm not sure on past tense ] to face me.” -
Anyway, always great to hear - or read - more from you, so keep up the good work - and don't make me wait on the Marriage Contracts ;-) -
| riegert8 chapter 5 . 4/9/2008
This is an interesting story so far
| Javaman777 chapter 7 . 4/9/2008
Great story, I like the cameos and loved Thor confronting the Wizengamut. Keeping the cameos to a minimum is a good idea though.
Although I would love to see Dumbledore trying to talk down to Dr. Strange LOL. Keep up the good work!
| some dallas dude chapter 7 . 4/9/2008
just wonderin if mr. frank castle or the pubisher if you like is goin to make an appearance in this story good start on the first parts of the story so please dont slack off or quit as it seems a lot of authors on here are doin
| grookill chapter 7 . 4/8/2008
You need to add a "humor" category. Or start up an "odd ideas/omake" story. The occasional "I am Thor, I am a god..." is something you ought to continue. Perhaps some meetings in a pub where Tommy and the villian of the week commiserate the recent setbacks. Who knows?
Obviously my favorite part was reading Thor and everyone's reaction. Too bad nobody gave him an excuse to make a mess.
Unfortunately for Harry, this is going to cause him pain and headaches in the future. Dumbledore, Fudge and Umbridge were upstaged and cowed by a superior being. Dumbles may learn a small lesson here, but Fudge and Umbridge? Nope. Not a chance. The question is, what will they do?
I suppose when Harry is down a little someone can visit and cheer Harry up a little. (I'm a DC collector. My choice? Keith Giffen's Ambush Bug.)
Hope to see more soon!
| Morbious20 chapter 7 . 4/8/2008
Outstanding chapter I can't wait for the next one. By the way not sure if you considered it but I think it would be really cool to have either a one shot or an omake of the troll scene but have say... The Hulk mysteriously show up and see if the Troll still wants to fight, after Harry seems to make very good friends with all types of heros I'm sure the thing and Hulk would put aside differences to help him out . Well keep up the great work and post again soon if possible.