|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Invincible TechnoMage|
| Hammerchuckery chapter 14 . 6/15/2010
Absolutely amazing! Please! Keep up the awesome writing! I am quite taken with, "You're going to have to stalk and capture your mate just like everyone else."
I would especially like to see this go on and on and on... you sir need to cash in your internet money! I'm pretty sure 2000 plus reviews must at least equal 2.5 million internet dollars. In this economy, the exchange to USD would allow you to buy an island or two with some lovely scenic background. It would be one spiffy picture to hang in the bathroom. If not, a tub of ice would do quite well.
| Rainspiral chapter 12 . 6/15/2010
hmm so old people can write fanfiction! (nore old for me is the same as older.) ans if you have kids chances are good you are waaaay older than me. unless you were a very disturbed todler.
| gecoma chapter 15 . 6/15/2010
good story great ending
| zabuza0302 chapter 15 . 6/15/2010
i got to say this is the best harry potter/ iron man and marvel crossover i have ever read. i like how you not following canon too. do you plan on him having a full iron suit later on? cuz that would be awesome. also want to know if you plan on writing sequels after he's finished with his time from hogwarts. keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter _
| Embarr chapter 11 . 6/14/2010
Still reading this, so it must be good... I'm not particularly familiar with some of Marvel but it didn't make much of a difference to me. As for the explanation for why Harry didn't recognize Dobby as a house elf, the logic falls short. Harry's too smart not to recognize what he is simply because he's wearing a tea towel and not a smock and hat. The mannerisms alone would have informed him quickly enough. I understand how someone might recognize a human outside their work clothes seeing as there is usually a significant change in appearance beyond clothing (hairstyle, makeup, attitude. It all adds up to a big difference).
| flame55 chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
this is great
| Garnet Avi chapter 13 . 6/13/2010
I'm guessing the who Luna with the diary thing was a fake-out, since I'm still mildly confused about who actually had it, and they are saying Luna had it the entire time. Now, looking back I see that there are no specifics that indicate Ginny or Luna, technically, but she does mention the Weasley brothers several times in a way very similar to the way Ginny would. I understand as neighbors, Ginny's brothers would likely have some influence, and would be quite possibly the only closely-aged boys she'd met before Hogwarts, but I suppose what I find most strange is that she doesn't mention Ginny concurrently with the boys. I think this is what made the thing most confusing for me; it's a very intentional mislead, but instead of saying "oh, haha got me", I'm scratching my head saying "what? did he change his mind?" still, at least 1 chapter later than the reveal. I suppose this is just a personal gripe, but I feel the need to wash it out of my head before I can continue slightly lost, so I thought it's only fair you get my two-cents as a side benefit.
Constructive (hopefully) criticism or 1 to the review count, any way you want to see it. I enjoy this story and I'm hoping to catch up on it eventually. :)
| Miss Mercury101 chapter 15 . 6/12/2010
What a cliffhanger! I love this so far, and I think the highlights were Sirius' business card and his...appearance at the charity gala.
| Vandenbz chapter 15 . 6/11/2010
This story is nothing short of amazing! The way you blended together the Marvel and Harry Potter universes is perfect. It's hilarious to see the characters interact with each other, Sirius' card was especially noteworthy. I have to wonder if Sirius will end up falling for someone from the Marvel universe, possibly someone introduced to him through Tony Stark. I can't wait to see what the Techsuit Mk 4 will be able to do, will it look like that armor you introduced in that omake? I'm loving this story, please update soon!
| DukeBrymin chapter 15 . 6/11/2010
Great to see a new chapter, thanks!
| Anonymous chapter 15 . 6/11/2010
Thank you for updating. I've been looking forward to it for a while now. Harry Potter crossovers can be so dime a dozen at times, but yours is a lot of fun to read. The story doesn't take itself too seriously (like the sorting song which I loved!) , but can still be taken seriously. A demon squirrel? This I gotta see! Please keep it up!
| xXxFailingDreamsxXx chapter 15 . 6/10/2010
Please write more to this story thanks.
| FuzzyBoots chapter 15 . 6/10/2010
I'm curious as to what will be done with the adder. I also find interesting the drain that's happening on the castle's resources due to the various devices tapping into the ambient field. :) Even if it's magic, there's no such thing as a free lunch.
I like the story. It's made me laugh out loud many times and you're doing a good job of making Harry talented, but far from perfect. I really look forward to more of the same.
| FuzzyBoots chapter 12 . 6/10/2010
Wee bit confused. We see Ginny with the diary many times and then it's suddenly Luna that's had it all this time? I'm assuming that Luna's covering for Ginny, but it felt odd to just have it dropped in there.
| T chapter 15 . 6/10/2010
I loved the add in of the fads.