Reviews for The Immortal
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
Simon might be immortal if you think about I mean, the spiral king was immortal and wasn't he in the same position as simon?
irezel chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
fuck you i'm cryiiiiiiiiing, not entirely your fault. i seem to be hopped up on Viral angst. which i'm sosoosoosoooooo ok with.
mark-engels chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Fantastic piece of work. Enjoyed it a great deal. Viral and Simon's characterizations are both spot-on.

skepsis66 chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
It's such a touching and inspiring moment you've captured. I was in tears by the end... Loved it!
OffhandScribe chapter 1 . 6/10/2009

He just had to give one more speech before he died didn't it?
kibakun chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
short but sweet. Awesome work. :)
New Level Darkness chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
This is... oh wow, I love this. You're my new hero.

I really love how you made Simon talk. It was inspiring, to say the least. Just like it should be. Great job!
Katty chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Great! Wonderful story :D
CrimsonHeartlock chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
This was grand. Kind of sad, but I could see it in my mind so easily, like it could've happened in the series. Really great writing. 3
BeatleBomb chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Oh my god... I can't even begin to think of any words that can describe how emotional, how powerful, and how well written this story was. I thank you for honoring us with the chance to read this.


Locke chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Out of all the fanfics I've read so far, this is my favorite. By a longshot. Most importantly, it gives meaning for both Simon's wandering and for Viral to live. Kinda fills in those painful gaps. Thanks a bunch! Write some more of these, eh? 3
Extraintrovert chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
The 'immortality is bad' trope is near-universal in all forms of fiction, constantly portrayed as a terrible burden to the poor soul inflicted with it. Trust Simon to swiftly crush those thoughts and turn a supposedly awful curse into the greatest of gifts.

A powerful, meaningful short that captured the characters and the situation wonderfully, succintly covering an expansive topic as well as giving a sense of closure to the relationship between Viral and Simon. Inevitably, I was pleased.
Hey you suck chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Hey guy, you suck. Do the world a favor and stop writing, please.
bubblegum-chi chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
that was just amazing! well written plot and surprisingly i can imagine them doing and saying all those things.. _ i've always wondered what would happen to viral.. being immortal and all,, poor him o.O but, this satisfied me! yey for me! and kisses for you!
La Romanesque chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
M... Beautiful mood. It's very depressing to see a defeated Viral. Made me think of the dream sequence where Viral has a family (one of the best parts of the series, IMHO. I loved the "who the hell do you think I am?" too. Boota going to Viral is also very touching. Bravo.
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