| Reviews for The Immortal |
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   Kristen Sharpe chapter 1 . 2/22/2008 Wow. The mood, the characterization, the moment when Viral realizes who the old man is - it's all handled so very perfectly. Thanks for a great story! |
| Ms Malestrom chapter 1 . 2/6/2008 ;_; that was suprisingly sad. my eyes got all teary. very cute story indeed, but why the hell is Simon homeless? oh well, i shouldn't take a gifted horse for granted, but this is amazing. warms my small hamster heart. love and peace! |
| Raptor2001 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 i wish that is squeal but i dont think becasue sereis is best .. i can't blame on Viral becasue he can immortal ... Simon die on Viral ... Damn they need love life or happniess life .. |
| KradHikari chapter 1 . 12/15/2007 lovely ficcy~ *clings to Viral* |
| JenKristo chapter 1 . 12/13/2007 oh that was so good! heart breaking but wonderful... i love viral and you wrote him so well... simon was even more amazing... what a writer you are! |
| snow887 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007 i love this! it was so sad yet sweet at the same time and hey, anything with viral and simon is awesome to me 8D |
| mangafreak7793 chapter 1 . 12/10/2007 that was a really great story |
| SquirrelLuvsPnut chapter 1 . 12/9/2007 This one actually made me cry. Job well done, mate, job well done. |
| Kerii-tan chapter 1 . 12/9/2007 So. Much. WIN XD Loved this, very well written and I'll always love anything involving both Viral and Simon. Instant-faved XD |
| May the rain be damned chapter 1 . 12/8/2007 'The Immortal' is just the right length; it has a good amount descriptions and very realistic dialogue. Good job. I'm surprised no one has commented yet. |