Reviews for Stop
DyanaRoseJill chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
My favorite part is

The rhythm got faster, and soon their feet moved swifter. The numbers became jumbled as Ambrose and Queen Lavender stared into each other’s eyes. Sparks heated as fire flowed through his hands and it almost felt like electricity. One, step, two three, step, one, step, two…steady but fast, fast but steady, don’t stop, remember to breathe, don’t blink, remember to move.

Stop.

That's brilliantly written. You pick up the pace, faster and faster, just as the dance moves, raising the tension and the emotion between the two of them, and then.

Stop.

Well done!
freak.on.a.leash.13 chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
this is awesome. loves it:)
The Undying Mongoose chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Fantastic! Sweet and sad, and perfectly in character. Poor Ambrose.
grey-eyed-goddess chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
See? I track you down, and we just happen to both love the same things. However, I'm all for Glidelia (Glitch/Azkadelia since he wouldn't remember her betrayal). That was great.