I think that your main characters are a bit overly powerful as humans. But I have little room to criticize since my current fic has the same element. Not flaming or anything. I just find that stories are more interesting when the character is dynamic and grows powerful over time. It keeps readers on the edge of their seat.

I can't wait for the plot to develop more. What about the dragon hosts? When will we see more of them?

Best of Luck! ~

~Luna

As a reader, I think you jumped into the story without developing more character for your protagonist. The plot seems interesting however. I'd like to see how this develops. I have a love of dragons.

Update soon.

-Luna ~

it's looking really good. Enkai has a cool name, and cool background story, so it shouldn't be boring. XD Add Oil!o!