*fans self*

whew. that was hot. but really tender and emotional. love the balance. great job!

FINALLY! A story that has DG help with Cains angst over Adora. FINALLY! HOOORAY! :) Love it!

This is SO FANTASTIC. Sexy and sweet and touching... I absolutely love it.

This is exactly how I would hope it could go if it had been on HBO instead of SciFi! Thanks!

That was great. It was sexy, angsty, a little introspective but most of all FUN! Thanks for the read.

Ah this is so good and I can't wait to read more of your stories:)

I think this is terrific! Great writing!

I liked that. It was bittersweet and real. Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

Yeow! Some hot stuff there!

But seriously, I loved it. Cain and DG were perfectly in character, and it was touching seeing Cain's emotional side. I also liked the way Cain came to terms with everything at the end, it was sweet the way you showed how he can accept DG's love and still hang on to the memory of his wife.

I just wish it wasn't over yet!

Okay, so I read this at work and had to wait until I got home to review it since it demanded more than a one liner.

In a nutshell: gripping, deeply emotional, wonderfully written and sexy as all get out. I love your inner perspective of Cain's turmoil, you've really got his character pegged which alot of authors struggle to do.

While I had only intended to read a chapter at work and then save the rest for later I wound up staring at my screen and not getting a damned thing accomplished until I was finished reading it LOL I've never been so annoyed to hear my phone ring at work. I swear I wanted to answer and say "Can't talk now - reading." and hang back up.

Bravo for another masterpiece! My Cain hat goes off to you. :P

hehe...saucy. I like I like...Much Luv Gnome

This was utterly brilliant. Mature, flowing and full of exquisit description. You capture the hurt, the emotion of the loss of his wife - mixing it beautifully with the hunger for something new with DG. I absolutely loved Cain "letting go" in DG arms.

Though I equally loved the two of them "letting go" - again...in a swirl of heat and passion. Sensual and very arousing depiction of the love scene. And your ending is perfect. Not fluffy - cause like you said, too much mush yuck. It was hopeful, and I love that kind of ending the most.

Bravo! Wonderful job!

I absolutely love this story!

Oh no! Sex! Whoot for sex! _ Haha

Very much awesome! Love it! Started sweet and then it got hot. Very good. Im very sad its over :( I hope to see more of your work!

I liked your ending. Think you did a great job showing Cain break down. Like bit on Concrit - it's hard to follow the story when you jump from present to past tense. Try to stick with one or the other. Other than that, great story. _