|Reviews for Broken|
| LITERARYjunkie25 chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
whew. that was hot. but really tender and emotional. love the balance. great job!
| dragonpearlz chapter 3 . 4/3/2011
FINALLY! A story that has DG help with Cains angst over Adora. FINALLY! HOOORAY! :) Love it!
| CinephileSandra chapter 3 . 4/27/2010
This is SO FANTASTIC. Sexy and sweet and touching... I absolutely love it.
| angeloneous chapter 3 . 9/18/2009
This is exactly how I would hope it could go if it had been on HBO instead of SciFi! Thanks!
| Danibat chapter 3 . 4/10/2009
That was great. It was sexy, angsty, a little introspective but most of all FUN! Thanks for the read.
| MewmewInuSailorHeart chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
Ah this is so good and I can't wait to read more of your stories:)
| tripwatcher2 chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
I think this is terrific! Great writing!
| Elliesmeow chapter 3 . 2/6/2008
I liked that. It was bittersweet and real. Thanks for posting.
| andee chapter 3 . 2/4/2008
Yeow! Some hot stuff there!
But seriously, I loved it. Cain and DG were perfectly in character, and it was touching seeing Cain's emotional side. I also liked the way Cain came to terms with everything at the end, it was sweet the way you showed how he can accept DG's love and still hang on to the memory of his wife.
I just wish it wasn't over yet!
| Alisha Ashton chapter 3 . 2/4/2008
Okay, so I read this at work and had to wait until I got home to review it since it demanded more than a one liner.
In a nutshell: gripping, deeply emotional, wonderfully written and sexy as all get out. I love your inner perspective of Cain's turmoil, you've really got his character pegged which alot of authors struggle to do.
While I had only intended to read a chapter at work and then save the rest for later I wound up staring at my screen and not getting a damned thing accomplished until I was finished reading it LOL I've never been so annoyed to hear my phone ring at work. I swear I wanted to answer and say "Can't talk now - reading." and hang back up.
Bravo for another masterpiece! My Cain hat goes off to you. :P
| Gnome90 chapter 3 . 1/26/2008
hehe...saucy. I like I like...Much Luv Gnome
| Alamo Girl chapter 3 . 1/16/2008
This was utterly brilliant. Mature, flowing and full of exquisit description. You capture the hurt, the emotion of the loss of his wife - mixing it beautifully with the hunger for something new with DG. I absolutely loved Cain "letting go" in DG arms.
Though I equally loved the two of them "letting go" - again...in a swirl of heat and passion. Sensual and very arousing depiction of the love scene. And your ending is perfect. Not fluffy - cause like you said, too much mush yuck. It was hopeful, and I love that kind of ending the most.
Bravo! Wonderful job!
| DarkAngl1890 chapter 3 . 1/14/2008
I absolutely love this story!
| BlondieSheep chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
Oh no! Sex! Whoot for sex! _ Haha
Very much awesome! Love it! Started sweet and then it got hot. Very good. Im very sad its over :( I hope to see more of your work!
| DaynaJD chapter 3 . 1/8/2008
I liked your ending. Think you did a great job showing Cain break down. Like bit on Concrit - it's hard to follow the story when you jump from present to past tense. Try to stick with one or the other. Other than that, great story. _