Reviews for As the World Falls Down
Guest chapter 6 . 1/17
I really wish you would update because this is a great story.
AlesiaWillows chapter 2 . 11/27/2017
Also I have read the book you got the idea of the plot from and I must say that your writing and story telling is way better than the original. It's much more believable and natural flowing, and you're showing not telling, I like this very much.
AlesiaWillows chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
Please update this. This is so promising.
25Carin chapter 5 . 6/28/2017
I forgot to mention what a great writer you are!
25Carin chapter 6 . 6/28/2017
Omg I completely loved and enjoyed reading! It's just so sad and disappointing that this story seems abandoned. Here's to hoping that one day you will keep going. I will give you a follow and favorite just in case . Even though I don't like reading something that's unfinished, I found it worth a read. Maybe more?
dumamoja chapter 6 . 6/1/2017
This amazing story is a interesting take in the arranged marriage plot line. With great character placement and interaction, and a rather unique view of the cultures involved. I hope against hope that this story is continued, and eventually finished.
AlesiaWillows chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
So sad it's been abandoned... This is one of the best arranged marriage stories I've ever read.
But I believe in miracles and hope, one day you'll continue this...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/25/2016
I hate jet so much
Guest chapter 6 . 3/24/2016
I know this is probably beyond hope of being continued, but I wanted you to know how wonderful this beginning is. The potential, though unrealized, is greater than many other stories I have read. Brava.
That One Weird Author Chick chapter 6 . 2/5/2014
Awwww! That's so sweet! If only it was real... So I know they are going to end up loving each other, but what about Jet? I love him in this story! (in the beginning I liked him a LOT more than Zuko) he should get a girl just not Azula or Mai (maybe Ty Lee *hint*hint*)
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
When are you putting the NexT part?This fanfiction is GREAT! :)
fthsit chapter 6 . 12/14/2013
So it's been a bit over a year... I really really hope that you somehow have not given up on this story. Because this is absolutely amazing. Hope things are well with you and know that your readers are still very much interested in seeing an update! :)
seward907 chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
This was wonderful! I've read it three times and I an anxiously awaiting an update!
Ray chapter 6 . 4/7/2013
Just a really great story - i wish you'd update. so good!
iluvjessemac chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
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