Reviews for Interrupted by Fireworks
Fluffy99 chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
CUUUTTEEE! OOC though, and they arent acting like the little saiyan devils they should be. Kinda confused on the "Phboia" Goten now has, because I doubt he would have been abused as a kid. Goten fear of heights? Uhm..no. The boy can fly...SORRY! I'm picky whenn it comes to TruTen! D: Great fic though, im just a moment ruiner TT
Byebyei4gothisexisted chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
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torib0o chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Yay!

That was so adorable; I loved it.

You know, there are hardly ever any really good TruTen stories and I'm glad you wrote one.

XD

-torib0o
Android-2217 chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
I can't help but go "AW" at this little one-shot.

This was just to adorably, my love.

:3
TobiLovesTatiFOREVERMUAHAHAHA chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
this is so adorable~!
SkittleGoddess chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Beautiful fic. I especially loved the romantic ending.
Jayn chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Aww! Love cute Goten and confuzzeled Trunks. Lol. I rather enjoyed this well-written piece.
nana16 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Cute story! Although I cant really see Goten having a fear of hights, For someone as smart as Trunks he is pretty clueless when it comes to his relationship with Goten.
Little Loki chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
That was beautiful. Truten is my fav. Dbz pairing!
MD chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Cute. It's a bit of a stretch giving Goten a fear of heights, considering how enthusiastic the kid is about flying, but overall the interaction is really them. What with Goten being secretly in the know and Trunks thinking he knows... but doesn't. XD
biscuitsface chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
A very nice short story! There are a few minor spelling mistakes and grammar errors, but nothing that makes it unreadable. Very cute :D