Reviews for Sister of Fate
ForgeUpwards chapter 7 . 6/11/2008
This is an awesome story. I love the plot. Just be sure to watch the spelling. I'll keep reading if you keep posting!
HPgeek1 chapter 12 . 6/3/2008
All I have to say is that you should be the author of the Inheritance Cycle...all of your stories are great.
Estrid2006 chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
oh please don't let eragon hurt mrutagh!

and let ayilie be all right!

hebo estel,

estrid2006
HPgeek1 chapter 11 . 4/20/2008
O please right more! I'm hooked on the story. Its fantastic! :D
ANGELOFTHEBLACKROSES chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
intresting very intresting!
HPgeek1 chapter 4 . 4/12/2008
Wow. i loved the fist stories but these are even better!
JadedFoxFire chapter 2 . 4/8/2008
okay, um you kind of need to check where your putting your sentences, and which paragraphs they're in.

Awesome otherwise.

Hugs,

MJ
Estrid2006 chapter 11 . 4/8/2008
no...ayilie i suppossed to be sweet and innocent!

please update soon!

hebo estel,

estrid2006
Xewioso chapter 10 . 3/30/2008
Great chapter! I'm so glad you got another one up! Update soon!
HPgeek1 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Wow. That was great. You use a lot of descriptive words and I can feel the potential of a great author in your writing.

Keep up the story! I want to see what happens
EvilBunny101 chapter 10 . 3/22/2008
Great chappie! But no Murtagh? (cries) Oh well, maybe next chappie, right? Please update soon!

~EvilBunny101
Estrid2006 chapter 9 . 2/22/2008
that was a cool chapter...i really hope that murtagh won't be hurt to badly!

and let ayilie and eragon make it to ellesmera in one peice!

hebo estel,

estrid2006

ps: does ayilie know she and eragon are siblings? i couldn't really tell...
Xewioso chapter 9 . 2/22/2008
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon!
Xewioso chapter 8 . 1/5/2008
Well, thanks for updating! I do have to say, though, that everything is kinda abrupt. I think you should add in a bit... more. Like, I don't know... adjectives, and how they're talking and all that, you know?

Update soon!
EvilBunny101 chapter 8 . 1/5/2008
Great chappie! Ayilie is getting a bit angry eh? Anyway, please update soon!

~EvilBunny101
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