Reviews for Hiatus
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
You have a chippe writig se that makws yu fun to read and the miami heat costume paragraph was fun. But the story lacked focus or a plot.
Fire From Above chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
You did a great job catching the voices of the characters.
Tabesco Lamnia Lammina Lamna chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Good story with only one problem - Brain's alias was Rudy Cooper, not Randy. Sorry, but this was the only way to stop the little OCD part of me from screaming.
Silent Sage chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
It was like a Dexter monologue, but in word format. Straight to the point with a hint of sarcasm. I really enjoyed it!
yayme2012 chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I loved it! Almost perfectly in-character. But a lot of the background info was unnecessary in my opinion.
ReadingRed chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I love this, it really reads like the books. great job.
super.laurent chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Excellent as your stories usually are!