| Reviews for Like VitaminWater |
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   The Silence of Heartbreak chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 do u like vitamin water or sumtin? cause i do! |
| symbiotic chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 A very interesting way to base a story and to carry it out. Your detail and grammar could be better, but otherwise your approach is so interesting and unique that I definitely want to see more. |
| soulnotforsale chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 Wow, I loved the ending. ] That was amazing 'cause you still kept him in his 'I'm so cool' character. ] Great job on the chapter! Update soon, I'll be waiting! |
| Bandana Bandit chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 Love this chapter. Also I just noticed those Vitamin Water facts. Haha, pretty original. :) LOL. Sai - Gay. pretty hilarious. Cho seems iunno.. whorish? Also how Sakura us texting her mom.. And you said that she doesn't talk to her mom often.. If you don't mind could you clarify that? Hope you update soon. :) -RLO |
| itachi-is-mine chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 great story! wats ur fav flavor of vitamin water? mine is X acai-blueberry-pomegranat mix |
| Sayonara Solitaire chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 HOORAY~! This is my favourite chapter yet. x3 Blehh, I know Sakura feels. I hate English with a PASSION. Then again...I also hate Math, sometimes Socials and very rarely but still, Science and PE if the coach makes us run 20 laps around the school. -grins- Mmkay, I'll stop rambling now. On with the review~ I really loved the late night visit from Sasuke. I really wasn't expecting it. I'm glad Sakura also has a harsh past. It kind of gives you something that she can relate to Sasuke with. I burst out laughing Sai being gay && cheating on her with another guy. Hah, I'm so mean. xDD But my favourite part would be at lunch. Cho was coming onto Sasuke like a leech. D: -shudders- Sasuke totally knocked her off. The ending would be the sweetest in my opinion. He was calling for Sakura to come with him. -giggles- Ahh but I'm weird that way, I always enjoy the tiny gestures of affection instead of the larger picture. Seriously, I /loovvee/ the way the way you portray Sakura and Sasuke. Don't stop writing && happy holidays~! ! Kat. |
| Heartbroken Confession chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 i love vitamin water! interesting story ] |
| Frank Was Not Like Other Sheep chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 that was an awesome chapter. really cute and sweet. |
| Yuffie's Ninja Insanity chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 Lol this is original and effing hilarious! |
| dark Alley chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 This story is really original. I love it! Can't wait to read your next chapter! |
| shina desu chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 Sakura rolled her eyes as she rested her chin in her palm, her elbow propped up on the table. She took her phone out, flipping it open, and beginning to type up a text to her mother, asking her whether or not she could maybe find her old notebook from high school with all of its doodles and creative elegance? uhm, didn't you say that her mother walked out on her when she was 7? why is she texting her? anyways, i lovee thiss fic. vitamin waterr pwns |
| Withafullmetalheart chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 love this chap. plz update soon but is there a reason Sasuke asked Skura in particular to go w/ him or is it just me. XD |
| ohforsure chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 Haha, that's so cute! I'm looking forward to the next chapters! |
| foodgoodmovebad chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 haha I really like this! I love the way you keep going back to VitaminWater-this is really unique and Sasuke is awesome ) Please update REALLY SOON! |
| AnaliseHardisee chapter 3 . 12/27/2007 This was such a good chapter! please update soon!_ -Ichigo |