I really like this! I hope you update soon!

aw that was sad but cute!

i like it, its very...original. the concept and stuff is cool. YOu've just introduced my new fav. yay!

Oui, Mademoiselle! I would gladly review! Wow! You speak french too! Anyways, Ehem. Ehem.

Why? Why has the story just started! I mean, aargh! I was reading the first chapter, then the second chapter, and then, argh! no third chapter! I am so looking forward to the next chapters! I am interested as to how you will make Sasuke a fifteen flavored VitaminWater while still keeping him the ice cube type of guy. Please update as soon as you have time! S'il vous plait. I will gladly wait for the next chaps! GOOD LUCK and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! :D

I LOVE DRAGONFRUIT! And you are so right it does taste better room temp. . UPDATE!

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Sasuke-kun, you're just like a Yogo! Hard on the outside, BUT I BET HE'S CHEWY AND SOFT ON THE INSIDE YOU BIG HUNKA MEAT. :3

anyway.. :3

I very much adore this. Favestime~

Reading your writing is so much fun.

nonguiltypleaseure~

so umm. how should I say this, eh?

SIMPLY DELICIOUS.

yeah. :)

i love this. plz update soon.

Ooh... Favorites. I absolutely love VitaminWater. Jeez, it's so wonderfully delicious. I'm so addicted to it. I, myself, haven't tried all the flavors yet... But I will! Haha. Ohh, dear, Sasuke sounds... Hm... GREAT already. Hm, do I sound like a total pervy? Anyway, I love this story. Partly 'cause I have a thing for VitaminWater. Mostly 'cause it's well written. Very good. I like it. Give me more more more! Are the VitaminWater facts true? Don't hurt me if I'm being a common-sense-lacking-idiot! Ohkay, so I hope to see another awesome chapter soon.(:

-rawrDattebayo

Wow... my eyes watered when I read Sasuke's story... Whatever experiment you're doing, you did a pretty good job, keep up with it. Nice to have them in-character in an AU story, to a point wherein Sakura doesn't fangirl too much, Ino doesn't go all annoying, Naruto doesn't crush on Sakura after meeting her and Sasuke not so cold since most fics make him too cold when he isn't that... you get my point. XD Will be keeping an eye for this. :)

Aw...this is so cute, cant wait to read more!

oh, here is an error:

Sakura looked at Sasuke with a small, amused Sasuke.

THAT MAKES NO SENSE!

...poor sasu-chan...your father's dead, your brother is missing (dead?), and your mother ran away (and if she ever came back, you'd probably ignore her).

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(and now, as you left the classroom, you can't finish your project either).

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Saku-chan, here is the first flavor (...cold? broken? lonely?...a very depressing and bitter flavor)

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AN ELEPHANT? sasuke's inner child could be a flavor! (yes, I'm trying to come up with a flavor...)

...and this whole conversation must make it awkward when they meet again...and around holidays...and if she ever mentions her family...(Sakura: My mothe...I mean...ano...I got a gif...BOOK! A BAD BOOK! ...and I think I should go unwra...I mean, return it.

Sakura: It's Mother's Da...I mean, I wonder what day it is? I should go ask someone. THERE'S INO! SHE MIGHT KNOW WHERE MY BOOK-I MEAN WHAT DAY IT IS!

Sakura: Merry Christ...I mean, look at the time! There's a...sale...on...toy elephants. And I want to...buy seventeen of them...not because you liked toy elephants! I'm not stalking you or anything!...I'M GOING TO BE LATE FOR THE ELEPHANT SALE! BYE!)

...yes, awakward conversations are in the future...

I hate coffee too. And I have no idea what vitamin water was, until now. I still haven't seen one yet. (I like milk!)

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Ah...the freshman fifteen. I didn't know what that was until this university student (Heather from this...university for business...yeah...)came to my school to tell us the 'truth' about our program.

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and then tell us about university...

...And she tried to be active so as to not have the 'freshman 15'

...May I never get that in three years.

wow. this is seriously really good. the vitamin water facts are so cute! hahaa. update as soon as you can!

haha. this seems like a really cute story. looking forward to the rest! great job!

really fun to read!

more please!...and where can you buy this stuff?..if it is real...haha..i wanna try..haha

~silentscream16~