Reviews for Like VitaminWater |
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![]() ![]() SWEETEST. FIC. EVEEEEEEER. It's 2015 and I can't believe I FOUND this story 8 years after its posted. Keep writing, oh-so-wonderful-sweety-author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was written like ages ago and I love the story so far, but I am a bit of a science nerd so I really had to point out that molecules/atoms that bond covalently are not ions. Ions are bond ionically or rather atoms that have ionically bonded - ;; I think you may have gotten mixed up between the terminology of atoms and ions is all~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gonna re read again |
![]() ![]() I love it! I will not go either if i were sakura, i will never leave sasuke behind especially those fangirls around hahahaha |
![]() ![]() Beautiful! Wonderful! I know it's been six years since this has been written and you may no longer write fan fictions or check the reviews, but I applaud this masterpiece! Thank you for restoring my faith in this site! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Every. Single. Moment. I want Vitamin Water now, I need to try it. This is amazing! Excuse me while I reread this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Gosh! You really had me pulling my hair, and screaming every chapter ( the scream had to be muffled by the pilliow or else my brother'll think I'm crazy). Great Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love that Sasuke said it first! In other fics Sakura always says it first and I think that's not right. Sasuke is probably more in love with Sakura than she is of him. He just doesn't show it. Anyway, loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this! It's definitely up there with all my other favourite fanfics, honestly I'm usually not as huuuge a fan of the sasusaku pairing as I am of sasuhina but this has got to be my favourite one. I love how it's mostly just the four of them-ino,Naruto,sasuke and sakura and not too in depth with all the other characters, they were all pretty likeable and I love how u portrayed sasuke in this. Also, the vitamin water omg.:o Basically the whole time I was reading this I wanted to be drinking some vitamin water, the first and only time I had tried it was the start of this year and i believe it was a peach-mango flavoured one...I thought it was pretty good but maybe a little too watery and not as much flavour? But I'd really really like to try more haha hopefully sometime soon although I'm not sure if they sell them nearby where I live,I'll have to have a look. The xxx and formula 50 vitamin waters really got my attention I hope I'll get to try them someday. And basically at the start of every chapter I'd be googling vitamin water flavoursxD hahaha anyways enough of my rambling.. Keep up the great work?:D |
![]() ![]() This is perfection! I couldn't stop reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. This is one of yhe best SasuSaku stories I have ever read and I really want a SEQUEAL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So so Beautiful! Even though it was short and well... Well anyways the ending was a happy one and I really loved it! Sasusaku 4vr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT WAS SOOOO FUCKING AMAZING. I LIVED IT And I'm going to look if I can buy that vitaminewater simehow. |
![]() ![]() I've read your story before and this is probably, like, my fifth time. I swear, with each reading it gets better. Congrats again on an utterly fabulous job! I just have three things to address that I probably didn't before: 1. When Sasuke says Itachi is GONE, does he mean dead? 2. Hyuuga Neji is mentioned here as one of Sakura's exes - but later in the story he is supposed to be dating Tenten and when Sakura talks about him she seems to have no past connections to him at all. Guessing this was a slip-up. 3. While I understand Sakura's character in this story is level-headed and far too pragmatic to indulge in overly-sentimental displays of affection, it still comes off as kinda odd that SASUKE - king of deadpan - would tell her that he loved her in a way more sincere than she did. Just my opinion. I still stick to my belief that this is an amazing story and I'll probably read it five times all over again and love it as much. Kudos :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fabulous! I loved every moment of it! Thank you for writing this! |