|Reviews for Indomitable|
| Zaz9-zaa0 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Please, m'dear, random makes the best material of beautiful, entrancing stories. :)
It triggered my curiousity that you put Balthier (comparing to other fictions) in such a malicious light, though, it was a wondrous deviation from what could only be seen as a 'regular' interpretation of their relationship. Additionally, you made Ashe's husband and offspring believable, to an extent where they broke past the call of OC and appeared as though they truly belonged in the FFXII-verse.
Of course, though, I'm positive you know just how greatly I adored the dream on Espers. ;)
| 0R1N0C0 chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
Random or not, I really enjoyed reading this. It was fluent and coherent, as well as amazingly interesting.
| Rehime chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
I loved this so much - the dreams are the stuff of a very talented imagination.