|Reviews for The Lost Spartan|
| Merinainen chapter 4 . 1/4/2008
this is a very interesting story. i really started reading it because of the summary which made me thought "hey, this guy has a kid with an alien! surely its something worth reading!". anyways, keep on the good work!
| Dragon-Tom chapter 3 . 12/12/2007
I like the explanation, and it would make sense considering that's the current basis of mutagenic science.
Anyways, good story, keep up the work!
| Dragon-Tom chapter 2 . 12/10/2007
Interesting story to say the least, but i have to agree with toliet on that. but nonetheless, very interesting. Hope to see more of it soon!
| king of toilet town chapter 2 . 12/9/2007
Your a good writer, and the story is good, but I dont think a mere chemical can cause an elite to change into a human.